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on your talk page and someone will show up shortly to answer your questions. Again, welcome! --Khoikhoi 19:09, 4 February 2006 (UTC)
Hi there. Sorry to bother you, but I notice you've just added a series of references to the ocean acidification article. I think they're good ones to add, but could you reference them in the article please? In the next couple of years there'll be no shortage of scientific papers on the subject, so I reckon it'd be best only to add new references if they make a new point relevant to the article (or supplant an older reference). Anyway, you may well be planning on doing this anyway. Cheers, --Plumbago 10:57, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
P.S. I think there might be an error in the top reference. The page numbers it cites aren't quite right, 351-33, but I'm not au fait with the reference.
It's going to take me a bit to get that up, but will work on it. Btw, I forgot to change the page numbers but will get to that tomorrow. Aloha, Arjuna 09:54, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
Hi Arjuna. I'm a bit concerned about your edit here. I know it's internationally recognized as Papua, and thanks for making the article more neutral, but is that accurate? I'm saying that because Papua is only part of Western New Guinea, it seems that we're forgetting West Irian Jaya Province. What I'm trying to say is, why would Western New Guinea be recognized as Papua if Papua only comprises part of Western New Guinea? --Khoikhoi 03:15, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
I changed the format of the userboxes on your userpage to a table format which should be more manageable for you. If you don't like it, you're welcome to revert it. I also updated the location of one userbox and removed two deleted userboxes. — Nathan (talk) / 02:39, 20 July 2006 (UTC)
Hey Arjuna, thanks for your note. I appreciate your concern regarding the Akaka Bill, but it seems you're still a bit misinformed. Considering both the Morgan Report of 1894 and the Native Hawaiians Study Comission report of 1983 as "whitewashes" isn't really fair at all. Certainly, the Morgan Report conclusions and testimony were never challenged or recanted (the way testimony to Blount was), and the bigger problem with the Apology Bill is its complete lack of historical accuracy and operative provisions (as noted by the Supreme Court in Rice v. Cayetano, which cited it but made its judgement based on facts in the record).
Furthermore, I'm concerned that you feel it necessary to label activists who challenge the historical mythology of the hawaiian sovereignty movement as "conservative". It would be just as NPOV to label the sovereignty activists as "radical" or "extremist". It seems like an inappropriate word for the context, when a more neutral stance can be taken.
If you have specific questions regarding the facts of what transpired in 1893, I encourage you to read the both the Blount Report, the Morgan Report, and the Native Hawaiians Study Comission report (all online). I'm more than willing to help you find specific information, and thank you very much for helping with the article! --JereKrischel 23:42, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
Are you suggesting that the U.S. Government had no role in encouraging the overthrow? Really? The Morgan report has never been challenged? Really? What is your source for this assertion? I don't take native Hawaiian sovereignty activists, many of whom I would completely agree with you are radical and extremist, at face value, and conversely, you might find it both salubrious and instructive to not always take official government reports at face value.
Interesting word you use there, "encouraging". I think the case can be made that annexation was encouraged (and in fact was negotiated as early as Kamehameha III, who died before he was able to sign the treaty he had agreed to), but that's a far cry from asserting that U.S. peacekeepers or Minister Stevens directly aided or abetted the Committee of Safety.
Insofar as challenges to the Morgan Report, my understanding is that there was one editorial in 1898 that critiqued it and defended Cleveland, but no further investigations, nor court cases, nor evidence was ever brought forth (and certainly, people as powerful as Cleveland and Liliuokalani had the means with which to bring forward additional evidence). My sources include the Morgan Report, the Blount Report, the Native Hawaiians Study Comission Report, Gavan Daws (Shoal of Time), Ernest Andrade (Unconquerable Rebel), Twigg-Smith (Hawaiian Sovereignty: Do the Facts Matter?), Kuykendall, newspapers of the era, and of course pro-sovereignty pamphlets, books and websites.
I think you're right to be skeptical of the government reports, which is why I was always more interested in the details of testimony than the digested opinions of the committees. The government report of Blount was especially interesting, being a secret investigation which was being used by Cleveland to pressure President Dole to reinstate the Queen...check out The Rest of The Rest of The Story for a quick overview on how Blount and Morgan crossed paths. --JereKrischel 05:47, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
If you want to have Bruce Fein's report mentioned and linked up, that's totally legit. However, if so then the article should also balance it with the alternative POV.
Isn't the alternative POV the Apology Resolution itself? Although people have attacked Fein's character and motivations, to date I haven't seen any rebuttal to the points he brought up...and believe me, I've looked!
If no one has explicity rebutted him, then perhaps that is because those involved in the debate didn't think it even merited such attention.
That's another ad hominem attack, though - on the merits, on the facts themselves, no rebuttal has occured because there are no rational responses. It was given enough attention to attack his character, in an attempt to discredit his assertions - had there been real arguments to be made, I'm sure they would have happened. Of course, I could be wrong, and maybe somewhere out there someone has done a detailed rebuttal. The problem I have though is that instead of providing an alternative POV reference that was a detailed rebuttal, all there were were ad hominem attacks. Granted, we can't really know whether or not that was because someone was too busy to do a real rebuttal, or because, as I claim, there is no response, but until then, echoing character attacks doesn't seem to be very NPOV.
As for the poll results you cite, you're going to have to come up with a more unbiased source than GI, who obviously has a dog in this fight.
Unfortunately, every poll ever conducted on the issue has been by a source that could be seen as biased (OHA got interesting results with a set of particularly leading questions once). If you read the GRIH questions, I think you can get a good idea of any bias that might be there - they also released their raw data so you can chop it up how you like.
I actually don't have a dog in this fight, but when I look up a Wikipedia article, I want the facts, not bias, which is what comes through in many of your edits. In any event, rather than get into a revert war, why don't we try to work cooperatively to find some neutral language we can all agree on?
My apologies if bias seems to permeate my edits - I do strive towards NPOV, and I know I'm not always successful (which is exactly why I appreciate your help!). I am particular about the facts though, and I'm afraid sometimes the bald statement of fact is not always NPOV. I'm sure together we can find compromise wording! --JereKrischel 05:47, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
Arjuna --- Anyone who states or believes (claims or conjectures, actually) that it was the intent of "the USA" to participate in overthrowing the Hawaiian monarchy in 1893 is faced with an insurmountable reality that rips the false belief to shreds: the friendship of US president Grover Cleveland with Hawaiian queen Liliuokalani, and Cleveland's initial efforts to aid the restoration of her rule. It has never been a secret that Cleveland personally entertained then-queen Kapiolani and then-princess Liliuokalani at the White House in 1887. Hawaiian-language accounts of their relationship show that it was definitely friendship. Not only that, Cleveland's foreign policy of not interfering in other countries' affairs has been known for over a hundred years. Under Cleveland, there was NO WAY that "the USA" would help to overthrow his personal friend Liliuokalani, as an intentional foreign policy decision of his administration. Agent X 21:52, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
I am the original author of the Blount Report entry on Wikipedia. Thanks for your helpful contributions, as I have not reviewed the page for a while. It is interesting that the page receives as much attention as it does - no one bothered to create one for a long time, well after the existence of the Morgan Report and "Republic of Hawaii" entries, whose author you have heard from already. It was as if...someone was trying to pretend it didn't exist. My interests aren't so parochial that I can keep an eye on the page every day, so I appreciate. If we can draw a critical mass of Hawaii-related contributors to these and similar pages, perhaps we'll achieve truly-NPOV and encyclopedic entries on these topics. Huangdi 06:24, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
This was a nice addition that you made. Do you have a citation for it? - UtherSRG (talk) 11:58, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
No, I don't have a citation (yet) -- but will locate the paper describing the species. I work with conservation orgs and museums on biodiversity research in Papua, and this was information I got straight from Flannery himself prior to publishing the paper. That said, I will check to confirm. Arjuna 01:45, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Confirmed. It was described from a single (damaged) specimen collected in 1961. This is in the Flannery/Groves paper. Arjuna 01:47, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Would you be able to write up this section of Fauna of New Guinea? I have no sources for it, and don't even have a clue what could be up there (except for Dugongs). --liquidGhoul 08:41, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Thank you for your courteous and helpful response.
I think my main point was that the word "still" implies continuation of previous activity. c.f. "Are you still beating your wife?" makes the assumption that the person was definitely beating his wife at some stage, and the only question isw whether he has stopped. Similarly, to say that the assylum seekers claimed genocide is still taking place, implies that it is beyond doubt that genocide was taking place previously and the only question is whether or not it is continuing today. On this basis I removed the word "still". It is true that the assylum seekers claimed genocide was taking place. Ordinary Person 00:54, 18 August 2006 (UTC)
Hello,
Can you named any important habitat that has been eliminated in New Guinea. I thought most of New Guinea's forests still intact ? especially in Western New Guinea. I know that Indonesian government have the so-called "transmigration" program to Papua. Also, do you know any birds species in New Guinea that is endangered now, affected directly by this conversion and elimination of forests? It's good to have New Guinea's update, since most of the time the western side is relatively closed to non-Indonesian.--Stavenn 12:01, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
Hi Stavenn dan terima kasih atas balasanya. Here's another report you might be interested in: http://www.eia-international.org/cgi/reports/reports.cgi?t=template&a=93. You're quite right that the situation isn't as terrible (yet) for either side of NG as it is on Sumatra or Kalimantan -- but the lowland habitat is so degraded or destroyed in those places that it would indeed be sad to have to judge it based on that standard, no? Conservation International lists both of those (Jawa too for that matter) as "Hotspots" as opposed to New Guinea which is a "Wilderness Area (misleading term) that is still (relatively) intact but going fast. Basically, western Indonesia and Malaysia having largely been depleted of readily accessible timber, the companies are moving on further east to Papua, PNG, Solomon Islands, and the Amazon -- increasingly to satisfy the growing demand from China. The mountainous areas in NG have some degree of natural protection from logging and oil palm, for obvious reasons, and you are right that one of the main threats to vertebrates in the uplands is from over-hunting. I think it would be great if you had a list of which species are listed by IUCN or CITES as endangered or threatened -- I don't believe in being alarmist but rather having the most accurate data out there (which is depressing enough). I also agree with you that the discussion of the threats would be better in another section. If you are familiar with the Ecology of Indonesia book series, you may be interested to know that the last volume, "Ecology of Papua" will be coming out hopefully before the end of the year.... Aloha! Arjuna 05:59, 31 August 2006 (UTC)
I rolled that edit back as it is the type of wording that brings edit wars, particularly in this type of page. I hope you understand. Feel free to edit out any similarly-toned commentary as you find it.Kukini 01:26, 9 September 2006 (UTC)
Quite clearly, I disagree. Hugh Hewitt does not have the name recognition of, say, the Dalai Lama, so some context is necessary. If you object to an accurate description of his POV, then how about just "talk radio host" -- which at least indicates that he comes from a particular (non-scholarly) kind of perspective. Arjuna 01:51, 9 September 2006 (UTC)
Thanks, and appreciate your comments, although I still disagree with you on the Limbaugh quote as well. Limbaugh's comment was outside the mainstream and beyond the pale, and Wikipedia should not be a forum for presenting extremist propoganda points. Just because someone, even someone noteworthy, says something does not necessarily make it worth repeating. To take a reductio ad absurdum, if someone else comes along and blames issue X on "the Jews", that hardly merits giving such comments attention. Aloha. Arjuna 02:00, 9 September 2006 (UTC)
Thanks, and I will. I am not prone to POV pushing (though I certainly have a POV) and strongly agree that articles should strive to be fair and as neutral as possible. Aloha. Arjuna 04:09, 9 September 2006 (UTC)
Hey Arjuna, thanks for the help with the Bayonet Constitution wording - you're right, "derisively" was npov, even if technically accurate. I think the reason why it matters to me is because of the common misunderstanding that the "Bayonet Constitution" was named so because it was signed by Kalakaua with a bayonet literally at his throat. The "Bayonet" was figurative, and I think the name often overshadows the real, substantive political struggle that was occuring at the time between William Gibson's faction, and local "conservatives" (for lack of a better term). Being clear about the origin of the nickname seems to me an important thing to note. Anyway, thanks again for your help, I appreciate the alternative perspective - it is helping move these articles forward. Mahalo! --JereKrischel 18:27, 6 October 2006 (UTC)
May I ask why you had a problem with adding an External Links section, and specifically, had a problem with the particular link? Thanks. Arjuna 19:44, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
The burden of proof is upon you to explain how the site "violates" [WP:EL] or [WP:COI] -- I have read them and can find no such conflict. Arjuna 20:13, 2 December 2006 (UTC)
No, I have nothing to do with it, which one would be able to tell by noting that from my user page that I live in Hawaii, while the person who created the website is a professor in Singapore. Arjuna 19:10, 4 December 2006 (UTC)
I reported the editwar on Tarsier at Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/3RR#User:Arjuna808 and User:UtherSRG reported by User:Ucucha (Result:). Ucucha 06:57, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
The article you wrote, Asmat regency, is uncategorized. Please help improve it by adding it to one or more categories, so it may be associated with related articles. A stub marker or other template doesn't count - please put in an actual category in the article. Eli Falk 12:43, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
Much of that stuff you removed is probably verifiable - although I agree totally with all your comments in your edit sums. I was intending to put those tags back in a few days. He is a problem editor - keeps rambling on about his personal views without providing citataions. WP:CIVIL prevents me commenting further if you know what i mean.
It would have been helpful if he'd provided page numbers and in-line cites. He's gone and 'retailiated' by throwing {{fact}} and {{cn}}Indonesia but in a way it is good thing. Ie, I enjoy the challenge and it can only help the article if those things are verified. So don't revert him in Indonesia!!! kind regards. Merbabu 12:45, 17 March 2007 (UTC)
It's airing tonight on Discovery, 8pm Eastern. Just thought I'd post this here to minimise the chance of you missing it. SheffieldSteel 18:10, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
Mahalo for your edits Arjuna808, I hope we can work more effectively together on some of the articles we've been disagreeing on. You have an important POV, which needs to be respected, but I think we can both do a better job if we work harder on finding good citations rather than simply copy-editing back and forth without some sort of compromise.
Do you think we could discuss for a while some possible compromises we could come to? In particular:
Can we focus together on one particular issue you find concern with, and get to the root of the matter, before continuing to revert each other? I'm sure we can find a good compromise if we work together. --JereKrischel 03:10, 26 March 2007 (UTC)
Mahalo Arjuna, for your contributions lately, but I think we're butting heads for no reason. Can we discuss some sort of compromise between "alleged" and simply asserting that there is no ambiguity as to the U.S. role in the 1893 Hawaiian Revolution? I'm getting the feeling that somehow it is becoming an emotional dispute, and that I've done something to terribly offend you. I apologize for any offense you may have taken, and hope we can work together to find some common ground. I'd be happy to work this out in email if you'd like to have a conversation "off the record" as it were, or just discuss it on our talk pages. Please get back to me, mahalo! --JereKrischel 14:56, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
The duration of the block is 24 hours. Here are the reverts in question. Nishkid64 00:38, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
Aloha. As I told JK on his talk page, I would be happy to help mediate this dispute. I would also like to see involved editors utilize WP Hawaii resources. This could mean creating new Hawaii-related guidelines for articles, conducting a poll, or drawing input from active members. Am I correct in assuming that the bulk of the current dispute/discussion is or should be taking place on Talk:History of Hawaii? If so, I will address any issues on that page if you prefer. —Viriditas | Talk 01:57, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
Mahalo for your concerns, Arjuna. I've done a comparison of S.147 and S.310 here, and would appreciate your help in making neutral note of specific differences directly in the Akaka bill article. Much of it I would probably assert has no functional bearing, but IANALegislator, and I'm noticably skeptical. Interesting ones are not requiring native Hawaiian blood to be on the commission, and taking away some of the Governor of Hawaii's role in regards to the proposed "United States Office For Native Hawaiian Relations". Original S.147 and S.310 here.
Please, feel free to add back specific HeartlyHear items if you think you can help address some of the concerns I already shared with him. Aloha! --JereKrischel 08:50, 1 May 2007 (UTC)
Aloha Arjuna, I am proceeding as you suggested, using the changes you reverted back to as a base line, and handling each one under an individual "fix" section in talk to deal with specific issues. I'm doing this in good faith, and hope you don't misunderstand my process.
For every change I'm making, I'm creating an "updates" section regarding that fix. We can address specific issues in that section, and work on balancing our concerns. Your input into each of these sections is greatly appreciated! Mahalo! --JereKrischel 03:52, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
Mahalo for the head's up Arjuna, I've made a few additional edits to the Akaka Bill article, pruning some text which seems purely speculative regarding the text of the bill, and adding in the tribal recognition criteria in the same place where claims are being made that provisions of the bill are onerous compared to those placed on tribes - it seems to fit well in that section. I haven't checked the list of prior versions yet, but I'll try and get around to that too. Aloha! --JereKrischel 04:19, 15 May 2007 (UTC)
Arjuna, could you please put specific notes in the talk pages of all the articles you tagged with POV? Mahalo! --JereKrischel 23:14, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
Aloha Arjuna. Asserting that there are "too many to mention" in Daws' Shoal of Time is not an appropriate reference. Please provide at least one if there are so many. Mahalo! --JereKrischel 20:41, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
Pages 270-275 in the paperback edition. Whether you agree with this or not, such scholarship is generally seen as supportive of the historical claims of injustice. And as for "too many to mention", this is applying a different standard to my references when you do not follow the same format yourself. Please be consistent if you're going to start down this road. Aloha. Arjuna 20:46, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
Example of Daws being cited not being "generally supportive" of the Apology Resolution: http://www.angelfire.com/planet/bigfiles40/MLK-Liliu.html "Historian Gavan Daws describes it this way: "The grounds of her home at Washington Place were searched, and in the garden the searchers found what they were looking for -- a regular ammunition dump; twenty-one bombs, some of them made with coconut shells; more than thirty rifles; thirty-eight cartridge belts and about a thousand rounds of ammunition; and some pistols and swords."" (Gavan Daws, "Shoal of Time" (Honolulu: University of Hawaii Press, 1974), pp. 282-283) --JereKrischel 20:50, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
"Wiltze seemed to approve what the Committee planned" (p. 270) -- clear demonstration of prior knowledge and support of a conspiracy. You may disagree with whether or not there was a conspiracy (and it is not even relevant whether there was -- i.e. I'm not trying to get back into the argument now), but at the very least it is read by supporters of the AP as evidence to their grievance. This is beyond dispute. Arjuna 20:56, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
As I wrote on the Talk:Liliuokalani page... The mention of bombs being found at her home is potentially misleading. Daws says, "The grounds of her home...were searched, and in the garden the searchers found what they were looking for -- a regular ammunition dump..." (bold added), Daws, p. 282-3). This can quite easily be read (as perhaps the author intended?) to suggest that the material was planted there and so the searchers therefore knew exactly where to look. At the very least, the evidence is ambiguous and will probably always remain so. Cheers, Arjuna 06:04, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
One man went to interview Captain G.C. Wiltse of the USS Boston, which was in port at the time, and Wiltse seemd to approve what the Committee planned. Lorrin Thurston and two others talked to United States Minister John L. Stevens, and he put no impediment in their path;
So good government triumphed, and the "overwhelming majority of the conservative and responsible members of the community" could breathe easy. But not quite, because the "overwhelming majority" amounted in reality to a few hundred men; in fact it would better be described as a determined and rather lucky minority. Not since the days of Kamehameha the Great had the Hawaiians distinguished themselves as a fighting people, and even the wildest of Hawaiian insurrectionaries, Robert Wilcox, was more likely to assail his enemies with words than with bullets. Just the same, the revolution would hardly have gone so well without the presence of the Boston's bluejackets, and even after the queen lowered her royal standard and retired from the palace the Boston stayed on at Honolulu. Minister Stevens had recognized the provisional government with what some people would have called undue haste...
Blount had taken his evidence at Honolulu, but he had not interviewed members of the Committee of Safety. Morgan called witnesses at Washington and accepted affidavits where he could find them. The provisional government got a very good press in the Morgan Report. No one was to blame for the revolution, said Morgan in his final statement, except the queen.
Mahalo Arjuna, you're about to break 3RR on Akaka Bill. I'd like to continue our conversation regarding the quote you see as unflattering to Akaka, please continue on the talk page rather than in the edit comments. Mahalo. --JereKrischel 20:54, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
You are also about to break 3RR. Let's take a step back on that one. I have to sign off now but more later. The boxing gloves are off for now, have a good weekend. Aloha. Arjuna 20:58, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
Aloha Arjuna! I read the reference you cited in depth, and I cannot find anything particularly POV pushing in its text. I suppose my concern is that the Honolulu Advertiser editorial board, including the author of the article, has explicitly endorsed the Akaka Bill, but perhaps we can look at that article in isolation.
That being said, it looks like it might be a good standard reference for a few questions, both pro- and con-. We could turn it into a named ref, and use it in multiple places, instead of just having it at the end. Thoughts? --JereKrischel 07:48, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
I added a legitimate sentence to the article on global warming, and I cited a legitimate source. You removed it and wrote "rv" as your comment. My entry was legitimate. It was not vandalism.
--grundle2600 May 13, 2007
I'm afraid you are mistaken. I accused you of no such thing, I merely deleted (by reversion) your not-well-thought-out addition of an inaccurate statement that "The United Nations has come out in favor of nuclear power as a way to combat global warming", which 1. mistakenly conflates the United Nations with the IPCC; 2. does not "come out in favor", but rather is a far more nuanced position on nuclear power; and 3. was material that was inappropriately placed in the article. By consensus, significant changes to the GW article are discussed on that article's talk page first. I think mention of the IPCC's position on nuclear power is certainly worth mentioning, but you had it in the wrong place. Arjuna 09:22, 13 May 2007 (UTC)
Aloha. I listed the reasons above -- actually it wasn't an accurate statement and it was in the wrong place. And aside from that -- and entirely irrelevant to the rationale -- I don't know why you assume that I am opposed to nuclear power. Arjuna 21:17, 13 May 2007 (UTC)
Thank you for making a report about Conn104 (talk · contribs · block log) on Wikipedia:Administrator intervention against vandalism. Reporting and removing vandalism is vital to the functioning of Wikipedia and all users are encouraged to revert, warn, and report vandalism. However, administrators are generally only able to block users if they have received a recent final warning (one that mentions that the user may be blocked) and they have recently vandalized after that warning was given. The reported user has not yet been blocked because it appears this has not occurred yet. If this user continues to vandalize even after their final warning, please report them to the AIV noticeboard again. Thank you. . Specifically here, the user did not vandalize since the lv3 warning. -- lucasbfr talk 11:09, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
Thanks for your message. Conn104 continued to vandalize pages after the warning, and I reported him again, for which he was blocked. Cheers, Arjuna 11:26, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
Thanks for the info. I had given up hope of any answer. Aboutmovies 16:41, 29 May 2007 (UTC)
Aloha, Arjuna, I responded to your comments on Talk:Hawaiian sovereignty movement. Your perspective is greatly appreciated, if you have time to comment further I'd like to address your concerns. Mahalo! --JereKrischel 05:36, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
I've replied to some of your comments on several Hawaiian Revolution pages, could you please remove the POV tags you've reinserted until you've come up with more specific citations for your assertions and concerns? Mahalo! --JereKrischel 04:30, 23 June 2007 (UTC)
JK, thanks for your amusing comments. As you are smart enough to know, but failing other ammunition than to request repeated re-interation of facts already expressed and demonstrated, there is already ample sufficient and specific cause, and that the views therein are not simply "my opinion". The POV tags will stay. Aloha, Arjuna 09:39, 23 June 2007 (UTC)
Aloha Arjuna, it seems I've been rubbing you the wrong way today - I am trying my best to communicate clearly to you, but I think maybe we're in one of those rough patches again.
Please, reset assured, I'm not requesting you remove the POV tag to deny any "majority" anything - I'm simply politely asking you to provide some specifics, or remove the tag until you can. I'm not prejudging your ability to find specifics, I'd just appreciate some courtesy regarding placing tags like that. I'm interested in improving the article, and the best way you can help move things forward is to be very specific, and to relentlessly cite your sources. Until you can be specific, the POV tag has no real meaning, except as a signal to others that you have unspecified personal issues with how it reads.
Insofar as informal mediation, why don't we ask Viriditas to help? Maybe a third party would be helpful in improving our communication with each other.
I will not remove the POV tag myself, but again, in the spirit of good faith, I encourage you do remove it, or to provide at least one concrete citation and example we can use to move forward. Mahalo! --JereKrischel 10:06, 23 June 2007 (UTC)
Aloha Arjuna, I'm sorry you've taken offense at my comments to Kaihoku. I simply wanted to make clear to Kaihoku that contrary to your assertions, I was not interested in maintaining a "POV tone" as you put it, nor clinging to any particular "political ideology". I assume for now your characterizations were made in haste, and that at heart you are willing to move forward and give everyone involved in our disagreement the benefit of the doubt.
Forgive me if my comments gave offense - they were not intended to do so. I was simply expressing to Kaihoku both my dedication to improving the article to address specific concerns you have, and hoping he could help me communicate my concerns to you in a more productive manner.
Again, I hope you take me at face value when I assert that I am not trying to stonewall by asking for details - I am genuinely interested in addressing your concerns with balanced citations, and a scholarly tone. It will help us both greatly to move forward if you accept my assertion that my intent is to work with you to improve the article, as I accept that your intent is to improve the article as well. Mahalo! --JereKrischel 23:20, 23 June 2007 (UTC)
Thanks for the heads-up. It may take some time to get up to speed again but I will take a look at the recent edits. Huangdi 22:49, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
Selamat pagi, Arjuna.
I have a request to ask of you.
I've been working on the Tok Pisin (TPI) Wikipedia (http://tpi.Wikipedia.org) and Wiktionary (http://tpi.Wikipedia.org). They were both started about four years ago. Very like the Hawaiian Wikipedia, the TPI Wikipedia is mostly a shell document; you can count the number of entries in the TPI Wiktionary on the fingers of one hand.
The only sysop on the TPI Wikipedia has been inactive for over a 18 months now, and basically the Wiki has fallen into disuse. A little over a month ago I began working with both Wikis, but lacking sysop permission my hands are tied as far as making any constructive changes. My efforts to date have been updating the Karen afeas (Current Affairs) news on the front page, adding randomly selected images from Wiki Commons in the Dispela Wik (This week) secton on the front page, and testing some of my ideas for improving both Wikis.
Last week I proposed to the EN WikiProject Melanesia group that an ad hoc board of editors be formed to oversee the revitalization of the two Wikis. Seeing how the Hawaiian-language only requirement seems to have kept the Hawaiian Wikipedia's article contribution rate relatively low (re the number of uncompleted article stubs), I've suggested (and tested) bilingualty as a possibility for the TPI Wikipedia. The idea of TPI bilinguality being that translations of English-language articles will appear in the Wiki also as articles translated into Tok Pisin, and vice versa. The point of having the TPI Wikipedia bilingual is that (1) English authors will have flexibility in contributing Melanesia-related articles which will be translated (as closely as possible) into tok pisin and appear as a Tok Pisin article, and vice-versa (the "Rosetta Stone" comes to my mind), and (2) bilinguality will serve to make the Wiki bilaterally useful to locals who use tok pisin in everyday interpersonal conversation as well as being helpful to expatriates working in rural and semi-rural regions of PNG and the surrounding island provinces where tok pisin and/or related variants (e.g., Bislama, for one) are spoken.
Because you evidently have experience or at least an understanding of the social conditions on the island of New Guinea, I'd like to ask you if you would join the WikiProject Melanesia group's ad hoc group as a participant in the discussions on revitalizing the two TPI Wikis. My particular interest is to see that the TPI Wikipedia be primarily focused on Melanesia, Oceania, and the Pacific Rim countries. Discussions are now ongoing about who the target audience will be, given the fact that tok pisin more by rural people than urban people, and where rural people have less access to computers and the Internet. Your ideas on the subject, again given your experience, would be very helpful.
One of the reasons I'm asking you if you'd particiapate — or at least act as an ex officio advisor — is that I believe you could provide helpful suggestions based on your experience in both the Eastern and Western Pacific. I think your undoubted familiarity with sounds and inflections of spoken Hawaiian pidgin English will make it rather easy for you to learn the nuances of tok pisin (a simple grammar structure, with 85% of the approximately 1,500 word TPI vocabulary being English words pronounced and spelled phonetically).
I can understand that, based on the discussions above, that you might feel that you have your hands full. However, giving us a little kokua every once in a while shouldn't be too taxing, and might even give you a little break from the discussions and editing wars.
I've tested the concept of a bilingual TPI Wiktionary, and the idea seems to work well. Similar to the French Wiktionary, the definition of a tok pisin word (or phrase) in the TPI Wiktionary will have a corresponding page for the English translation of the word, but having the English word explained in tok pisin. For each of the pages there will be definitions in other regional and/or historically related languages, e.e., Solomon Ailans Pidgin, Bislama, Dutch, German, Indonesian and Japanese. While my knowledge of bahasa Indonesia has eroded with time, I can still use my dictionaries to translate tok pisin and English to Indonesian, but your fluency with with the language would be an exceptional help, even be it, given your time constraints, little more than proofing our dictionary entries.
I hope you'll join us in this effort. Terimah kasi yang, tuan.
K. Kellogg-Smith 03:09, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
Aloha Arjuna, good to see your edits again! I disagreed with a few of them, and tried to move towards some compromise language, but I'm going to need your help in removing my bias from the tenor and tone of my suggestions. Please feel free to take a pass at some of them, and we'll see if we can get closer to the center.
Of all of them, probably the most difficult one for us to come to grips with is going to be the whole "alleged" issue. I'm not sure what the solution to that one is going to be, since we've already written forceful arguments on both sides of that issue - maybe we can simply defer it to Viriditas and let him have the final say.
Anyway, good to see you around again, work is a bear for me as well, and I only get to edit once or twice a week now :). See you around! --JereKrischel 15:59, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
I'll try not to take offense at your tone in your last message to me, but let me be just a frank and un-sugar-coated in my position - putting POV tags in without being willing to be specific about things isn't appropriate. I have never taken the position that there was no dispute - my position has been that you had not usefully characterized the dispute. Saying you disagree with something, and having a constructive conversation about how to improve something are two different things. I believe you've done better at being constructive since we started out, but judging me by my external writings, however you may feel about them, is not effective at moving things forward. I stand by everything I've written outside of Wikipedia, but I respect the fact that Wikipedia is not a soap-box, and that a successful collaboration between people of dramatically differing opinion requires that we not hold other's opinions, either implied or explicitly stated elsewhere, against each other.
If you'd like to take the conversation further regarding my external writings, and what you particularly find offensive about them, I welcome you to email me directly, and I hopefully I can better explain where you are mistaken or confused, or you can better explain where I am not communicating effectively. I hope that regardless of what kind of discussion we can have about the world outside of Wikipedia, you can treat me with the same kind of assumption of good faith that I treat you. As a person who does not use an alias while editing here, you can choose to use the opportunity I give you to know about my "real life" as a sign of trust and openness, if you'd like to...and I believe that is the cornerstone of the WP:AGF policy. For all I know, you're Bumpy Kanahele...not that it would make me treat you any differently :).
Thank you for your candid thoughts, and I hope you can appreciate mine. --JereKrischel 06:27, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
I do indeed find your writing disturbing. While I have made it abundantly clear that I strongly disagree with the views of Hawaiian sovereignty activists, your comparison of them to Nazis and their agenda to apartheid is, frankly, disgusting. You are entitled to your opinion, but so are others as well about your publicly held views. (JK's recent essays can be found here, here, here, and here. I'm afraid I am not mistaken or confused about what you write, it is quite clear and you fail to see that I simply see it as misguided in substance and vile in form.
As for POV tags, their justification has been ample from the discussion (my own and others') on the respective talk pages. Your position seems to be that because you summarily dismiss any contributions or objections from others with even a middle of the road POV, therefore there is no dispute, and therefore any POV tag is unjustified. This is a quite childish, but effective, strategy to simply wear people out.
You have crossed the line of decency as well as intelligent discourse, and while I will remain civil towards you, I'm afraid we will not be corresponding by email. You will simply have to take my word that I have no connection to any Hawaiian activist group whatsoever. Arjuna 10:04, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
Aloha Arjuna, regarding your 11/11/2005 comment off of wikipedia, stating "Ok, look: Bush and his Neo-Con/evangelical/corporate alliance aren't Nazis. But it's also time to start recognizing what they represent: an incipient species of American fascism." Certainly you stop short of calling the U.S. government nazis - but why would you be willing to make that comparison to nazis (like I do with the race-based hawaiian sovereignty movement), but then excoriate me for doing the same?
When I look at the posts you cited regarding nazism and apartheid, here's what I find:
The Nazis did not have any collective racial claim to supremacy in Europe during WWII, the white South Africans did not have any collective racial claim to supremacy during the era of apartheid, and neither do people with the smallest fraction of ancestry traced back to pre-1778 immigrants to Hawaii have any just claim against their own peers, neighbors and cousins.
I'm certainly not calling anyone a nazi (as you don't in your comment), but simply indicating a particularly insidious racism practiced by nazis, the south african apartheid regime, and now embraced in a similar manner by race-based hawaiian sovereignty activists. Why does that offend you so much, to the point where you're no longer even willing to discuss edits or changes or improvements?
In the most basic reading of my passage, I am contesting that there is no collective racial claim that can be made, anywhere, that is just. Is my contention of that point what is particularly upsetting to you? I could have made an example of the Hutus and Tutsis in Rwanda, or israelis and palestinians - would those instances of collective racial supremacy have been more palatable for you?
I hope you're willing to re-read what you seem to find so offensive, and perhaps explain to me why decrying the assertion of collective racial supremacy either doesn't apply to race-based privileges claimed in Hawaii, or shouldn't be considered a negative linked with the nazi or south african apartheid regime. Mahalo, and aloha. --JereKrischel 08:51, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
The idea does not originate with me but is part of the mainstream political debate: see American Fascists: The Christian Right and the War On America by Chris Hedges. I do find your stalking disturbing as well; perhaps you can tell me how you located that. Do I need to hire a body guard? Arjuna 08:59, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
You cited:
Russ, William Adam (1992). The Hawaiian Revolution (1893-94). Associated University Presses, 372. ISBN 0945636431.
The Hawaiian Revolution is 372 pages. Page 372 consists of the last of the "W"s and the "Y"s in the index. How is this a specific reference? --JereKrischel 04:36, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
Adding this for the record and future ease of reference: here are the specific page numbered citations I made, but did not have time to finish before reversions started. Arjuna 20:26, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
I just wanted to say that I've been watching some of your edits and they were good enough to inspire me back into editing, myself. It seems (if I'm wrong, just take it as a complement) like you are probably not an "activist" like me, and yet you are not afraid to fight for a balanced perspective. I really admire that a lot. I will probably be popping in & out of Wikipedia kind of sporadically, but I hope to run into you more! Mahalo nui, --Laualoha 12:07, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
I was attempting to add a Hawaii Nation entry to Wikipedia and differentiate it from both Kingdom and Sovereignty but all of the variations got redirected to the Kingdom of Hawaii page after less than one day. Anyways, I VERY much appreciate all the work that you Arjuna and people like you have done and are doing to insure that objective and accurate information about Hawaii and the Hawaiian people even makes it into the general information pool. Please let me know what your highest priority issue is and I will do additional research and offer an additional opinion as to its validity so that you do not get strong-armed (fascisized) into complacency. -- PiPhD 22:56, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
Hi, I was wondering if you could take a look at the proposed MOS and make any changes or suggestions. As for helping mediate the current conflict with JK, I will address it later tonight. —Viriditas | Talk 04:38, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
I'm curious, why are you using level one headings on your talk page? —Viriditas | Talk 12:10, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
I'm not sure why JK added "alleged" into the lead, but your inclusion of "as well as numerous other historical sources" should be clarified to list the most notable sources by name and added back into the article. The same holds true for "have been disputed by many historians and researchers"; you should name the most notable ones and add the content back into the article with sources. —Viriditas | Talk 12:10, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
Thanks -- it was extended rather than immediate family (not that that makes it any more fun) but actually sometimes it's good to have something else to do to take one's mind off, so I'll be popping in and out. A reminder to put things in perspective though. Arjuna 10:20, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
Try to avoid attacking JK. See also: WP:NPA. I know this issue is important to you both, but you both need to pull back and take a look at the bigger picture. We need to put aside our political beliefs and improve the articles. —Viriditas | Talk 00:45, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
I understand the issue of the Blount Report versus the Morgan Report. Would both (or all) of you please send me a private e-mail at pi+at+upi+dot+cc (without the plus signs), perhaps CC:ing each other, and offer me your respective top priority information-to-be-added in regard to what specifically each of you would like to add next? If you have read my personal area or read about my concept of PiALOGUE then you may have noticed that I specialize in both disambiguation and mediation. Since you both have a strong point-of-view then this tells me that BOTH of you are missing something in your dialogue together. Perhaps one or both of you simply needs to learn to explain your point-of-view in a way that the other person CAN listen to. This may require an adjustment in languaging as every genius tends to have their own personal language which is differentiated from the understanding or awareness of the status-quo human being. Outright denial of the other person's position does not add to or further the overall dialogue (or PiALOGUE). Okay? Thanks! :o) -- PiPhD 21:57, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
Arjuna, I really appreciate your contribution, really do. Could you please add that in Flora of Indonesia or Fauna of Indonesia that still have bad shapes? Adding all details to Indonesia article, which is already tooooo long according to WP:SIZE is not helpful. I think it is more helpful if you can improve those two articles. Cheers. — Indon (reply) — 12:47, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
Hey Arjuna, just wanted to thank you for some of your recent, extremely good faith edits. I've been distracted a bit by work, and I greatly appreciate your attention to all these articles.
If you have the time, I'd appreciate any hints or suggestions you may have for the Nalayne Mahealani Asing article I started. As per Laualoha's suggestion, the divorce information really belongs in a biographical article, not the legality article, but I'm not sure if I've kept neutral tone. I think that Asing's legal history is important to a more complete article about her (just as divorces are mentioned in celebrity articles, for example), but there may be a need for either balance of content, or balance of tone. Your kokua on this is appreciated! Mahalo! --JereKrischel 07:32, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
Hi JK. Sorry, but I'm not going to go anywhere near any articles on specific (living) individuals here in Hawaii. Good luck. Arjuna 08:38, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
JK, it's time to hit the hay here, but I think maybe we're at an impasse, and rather than try again, what do you say we ask Viriditas to weigh in on this? Crossposting this on your page. Cheers, Arjuna 11:30, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
I'll check in first thing tomorrow. I'm too tired to read the discussion at this point. —Viriditas | Talk 11:57, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
Hey Arjuna, I did the due diligence of putting more details on the talk page before just reverting - I'm more than happy to discuss any specific objections you might have to my list, to try and find some sort of compromise wording, phrasing, or citing. --JereKrischel 02:16, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
Aloha! Sorry, my bad (sort of). I went into sort of a frenzy trying to keep up with Jere deleting my stuff, and I think I put in some junk links when I was trying to redo them. I will definitely have to fix some of it. He brought up the same problem, so I found the ones that he was questioning, and gave him some answers on the bottom of my talk page (not that you really need to endure one more of our discussions). If you give me specifics Iʻll get them, though one of the problems Iʻm having is that the stuff viewable online doesnʻt quite match up to whatʻs in print -- especially JTMʻs own writings. Iʻll get to fixing all the links in the article soon I hope, but I have a bit of a struggle on my hands both on Wikipedia & in life so itʻs been kind of hard to get to stuff...mahalo...--Laualoha 07:51, 26 August 2007 (UTC) ps I tried the email but havenʻt figured it out yet...
Hey Arjuna, edits look good, thanks for the refs, made one small change (involving -> both), but I don't think that's a big deal. Still digesting your email, it's a good read, and I'll reply when I have more spare cycles. m/c/t --JereKrischel 00:19, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
Hey Arjuna, just a few things:
1) do you have a specific quote from Kuykendall that says Morgan was "insincere"?
2) don't you think it relevant to note that some of the most incriminating testimony of blount was recanted?
3) do you have a specific page cite for tate?
I'll try and clean up the Russ ref to Pauline King, but right now it's misleading. Your further details are appreciated. m/c/t --JereKrischel 03:00, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
Wasn't me dude, all the ip addresses in question are from some AOL account in Washington D.C. - I've been playing Company of Heroes and Metroid Prime 3 Corruption all day, and wasn't even close to awake at 7:28 am (I slept in till at least 10:30). If I wasn't ready to WP:AGF, I'd assume that someone was trying to frame me. As it stands, I doubt Laualoha has the moral or technical wherewithal (or the washington DC AOL access) to attempt such a ruse, but she was awful quick to accuse me of sock puppetry, so I wonder where she even got that idea. I wasn't even close to 3RR on the page, and I had already given detailed information on why I disagreed with her edits...I'll also note she completely reverted my change before adding anything to the talk page.
Anyway, please feel free to verify my story by checking the geobytes.com information on the ip addresses in question, and your character witness support is appreciated. I would never resort to anonymous reverting - I'm more than happy to get into conflicts, and I think you're a good witness to that. m/c/t --JereKrischel 23:26, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
No worries JK, I believe you. Even before checking the IP later, I thought it didn't seem in character, so that's why I asked for evidence first (I've been busy so asked for someone else to check WHOIS). I don't suspect anyone of trying to set you up, just that they jumped the gun a little bit based on the editing tensions -- sometimes putting 2 and 2 together leads to an unwarranted conclusion of "4" when no addition was actually involved! Btw, I think we've both inadvertently gone past 3RR in our zeal from time to time. While we should obviously work to avoid edit wars entirely, in the case that we do and you (or any other editor who I know is not a total asshole/vandal) go past 3RR by accident, from now on I will at least tell you first and give you a chance to self-revert -- because I know if you do go past it's an oversight and not trying to game the system. As for the various articles, I haven't had time to look at all the changes the last few days and it's a lot to get back up to speed on. Given that the Legal Status article really needed a major re-vamp anyway, I suggested we go with L's version there to spark some needed creativity and re-thinking. I haven't forgotten about the need to get the other articles up to shape either, but work has been busy here, and for once I wanted to actually enjoy a holiday weekend and not deal with Wikipedia. Hope you had a good one too. Cheers, Arjuna 05:11, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
Yeah, it was me who screwed up. Thanks for helping to sort things out, Arjuna. --Laualoha 15:25, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
Arjuna, sorry, I was taking a break from Wikipedia. JereKrischel can wear you out! If you still require any help, let me know! I did add some Citation Needed notes to the page where I saw he was the last to edit. Some of the statements he makes need "backing up". Oh yeah, and I "borrowed" some of your user tags from your page, of stuff that applies to me too! THANKS/MAHALO!
--Kaihoku 20:13, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
Mediation Barnstar
I award this Barnstar for helpful and often-exhausting mediation on the Legal status of Hawaii page, including fair and fearless calling-everybody-on-their-crap. Mahalo nui loa!--Laualoha 23:53, 6 September 2007 (UTC) |
Arjuna, I have made some edits to the overthrow page. Would you mind looking them over. Thanks. Eekadog 00:43, 15 September 2007 (UTC)
Hey arjuna, maybe we're getting off to another tiff here, just wanted to leave a message, and maybe snip it in the bud. Some of the POV push assertions you're making don't make sense to me - what do you think is POV about putting things in chronological order around the landing of troops from the Boston?
Can you help me find some sort of compromise language, if it's tone you're worried about - I think I've done a decent job of citation and you should agree that the primary points brought up are valid. I don't mind trying to fix things to help with tone, but just blanking out my edits seems a bit rushed. Can we slow it down a tad, maybe give me some alternate language, while still including the points I'm trying to make? c/m/t --JereKrischel 05:14, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
JK, ok, fair enough. c/m/t, Arjuna 05:30, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
On History of Hawaii, why are you removing the information about the Naniwa? And what is wrong with the Twigg-Smith cite? On some of the other details, I can imagine we may have to do some wordsmithing, but some of the stuff you're reverting doesn't seem like it would be a problem between us - or am I making an assumption there about your perspective on TS and the Naniwa? Can we at least leave that stuff alone while we work out the details on other wording?
Take for instance "group of European and American citizens and Hawaii residents formed a "Committee of Safety" on January 14, 1893 with the goal of overthrowing the monarchy and annexation of Hawaii to the United States." My version uses "European and American Hawaiian subjects" (since there were both subjects and resident aliens, which I believe "residents" cover), and says "in opposition to the Queen and her plans". The record shows that overthrow of the monarchy and annexation were decided at the mass meeting, not predetermined by the Committee...can we do some sort of melding here, and maybe say "in opposition to the Queen and her plans. The Provisional Government formed later by the Committee was dedicated to the idea of annexation to the United States.", or something like that? I get your point - the committee wanted to depose the queen, and the PG wanted annexation. But can you see mine, regarding the importance of exposing the timing of those decisions and actions?
Anyway, if this is a bad time to argue about this, we can take it up later - just wanted to try and get some clarity about exactly what your issues are. c/m/t --JereKrischel 05:31, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
P.S.: just added a cite regarding the committee, its desire for annexation to the united states - hopefully you'll see this as a good faith compromise attempt on my part, even if we need to move it further in your direction. c/m/t --JereKrischel 05:31, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
I have reverted your recent edits to the Sanford B. Dole article. There is no justification to remove verifiable source citations. What one may consider as public fact, another may consider as just opinion. Having valid references and verifiable sources eliminates any disagreement or misunderstanding. You might want to take a look at WP:CITE. Truthanado 23:18, 18 September 2007 (UTC)
Uh, sorry but the statement that "After an unsuccessful attempt at armed rebellion on January 6, 1895, the Queen abdicated and swore allegiance to the Republic of Hawaii on January 24, 1895" is a fact and not an opinion. I removed the second citation because it is linkfarming. Re: the other statement for which I removed the citation: citing a secondary source is incorrect, since it attributes a conclusion to the book when it is in fact attributable to the primary source document. It should cite the Morgan Report, if anything. Arjuna 23:29, 18 September 2007 (UTC)
This edit wasn't really "vandalism", was it? Mahalo. --Ali'i 19:27, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
You are right -- my mistake so thanks. It looked like the link to the main article on the Hawaiian hotspot was taken out, but I had it backwards. Cheers, Arjuna 19:52, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
Mahalo, Arjuna, for your Morgan Report edits - adding the additional Tate quote, and citing things is very helpful, and appreciated.
OTOH, I had to revert your Blount report edit - you changed a quote directly attributed to T-S, I believe you may have thought they were my words. If there's something else we can do to make that section more clear (maybe just quoting kuykendall directly), let's do that, but T-S was calling Kuykdendall a historian in the text.
c/m/t --JereKrischel 20:47, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
What exactly does Viriditas mean when he says he's going to take things to the next level? Eekadog 21:34, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
Are you sure that LarryQ's views still "accurately represent yours"? He changed them, just to let you know if you didn't already, and your endorsement is still there. Personally, I find them rather offensive. Especially when he compares the maybe-the-US'-actions-were-not-totally-legal view with "those who believe that the world is flat or that the Holcaust never happened". Never thought I'd miss Jere, but...well, I better not speak too soon, huh? I'm writing him to let him know about the debate, because I think he should and I know I'm gonna hear it from him anyway. Then I'm checking into Kane'ohe Red Roof Hospital. Why wait? Aloha, --Laualoha 00:50, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
Please read and respond to my latest comments on the talk page. I'll give you time to chew it over, and I hope you'll find at least a portion of what I'm saying as valid, but I'll revert again tomorrow if you don't at least have some sort of reply on the talk page. I'm getting the feeling that you're just reflexively supporting eekadog's edits without looking at them critically - no offense intended, it's just coming across that way, even if it's not true. c/m/t --JereKrischel 06:53, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
Aloha all. I have basically been out the last few days with work stuff, and won't have a chance to look over the discussions and recent edits until the weekend. Cheers, Arjuna 19:56, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
Eekadog 03:57, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
Thanks -- interesting take. Hadn't considered that that may be his objection. Agree on the Naniwa thing too -- far too detailed to justify inclusion in a general article on the History of Hawaii, but if he really wants it as a footnote I've got no problem with that. Aloha, Arjuna 06:17, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
Arjuna, would you mind weighing in again on the native hawaiians page. I'm interested to see what your thoughts are on Jere's latest add. You can see the discussion between JK and myself on my talk page. Also, thanks for defending me on JK's page, I had been gearing up to write a response this weekend but it seems as if the latest storm has past. Eekadog 09:58, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
I would tend to disagree with you. I've been acquainted with him for over 9 months (Children of Men, ALF dab page, etc), and I can testify that the editor in question has not distinguished himself, either to me or others. I am glad that you feel compelled to defend the lad; it shows character. However, it's best not to misrepresent the person as someone he simply is not. - Arcayne (cast a spell) 00:45, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
Thank you for your opinion. Arjuna 01:04, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
Don't know you and have nothing to gain here, but I wanted to complement you and HereKrischel both on the mature way you've handled your POV disagreements. Lots of passion there on both sides but much respect as well. Very refreshing!--Lepeu1999 13:55, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
JK has vandalized my talk page and removed your comment. Very laughable Eekadog 17:46, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
Supremely annoying. Arjuna 19:10, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
JK, I accept your explanation, I've accidently done the same thing before, but it's Eekadog that is the aggrieved party this time. Maybe part of the solution is to slow things down a bit. Is it that important that we immediately revert? We will soon go over 3RR if so. Btw, do you have a response to my recent comment on that? c/m/t, Arjuna 20:30, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
Mahalo for the warning. Here's my current take on the articles:
Overthrow of the Hawaiian monarchy
Do you see an 3RR violation there I don't? I'm trying to be very vigilant about honoring that rule, and if I've broken it, I'll certainly revert as appropriate. c/m/t --JereKrischel 23:58, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
History of Hawaii This is clearly a case of vandalism by eekadog, and arguably by you - simply claiming that citations are POV pushing, without being able to describe why you consider that so isn't reasonable. I see you've reverted for me on this page, I would have done so myself to avoid 3RR as per your warning.
I think at this point, either you both need to be more specific about what you find objectionable about the citations, or we need to take this into mediation. I'm happy to spend my 3 reverts every 24 hours fighting vandalism by you and eek, but I think we'd all much prefer to improve the article together.
Mahalo again for the 3RR warning, next time give me a few minutes to do the revert myself and I will :) c/m/t --JereKrischel 00:04, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
JK, you are babbling. I don't know what you are talking about. Reverting on this page -- what? 3RR is revering, whole or in part, the work of others. This you have clearly done, and all our reversions are legitimate reversions of your POV pushing. I regret that I have no alternative but to report you for 3RR now. Sorry. Arjuna 00:15, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
I'm sure you've seen this before...
OVERTHROW: MORGAN REPORT OP-ED DOESN’T REFLECT FACTS
Jere Krischel’s Jan. 15 op-ed, “Morgan Report is public at long last,” sounds more than a false note; it appears to be part of an orchestrated effort to suggest that Sen. Morgan’s report of 1894 about the role of the U.S. government in the overthrow of the Hawaiian monarchy was right and Sen. Blount’s report was wrong.
Actually, the conclusions of the Morgan Report without the accompanying documentation have been widely available ever since they were submitted to the Senate.
Why does it matter now? Because Morgan maintained that the U.S. was blameless in the overthrow. His view supports the argument that the Republic of Hawai’i was a legal government and thus entitled under international law to transfer the sovereignty of the Kingdom to the United States.
Thus Krischel states: “In response to the findings of the Morgan Report, (President) Cleveland rebuffed further entreaties by the queen for intervention and recognized the Republic of Hawai’i as the legitimate successor to the kingdom.” The republic was never legitimate, however, because the majority of the population opposed it.
Nor was the Morgan Report responsible for changing Cleveland’s policy. For an accurate account of that, readers should consult Thomas J. Osborne, “Annexation Hawai’i” (Island Style Press 1998), pp 79-81. Cleveland lost the support of Congress when he tried secretly to reinstate the queen. The Morgan Report reflected a compromise within Congress: It absolved Cleveland for his effort and recommended no further action to annex Hawai’i.
Stephen T. Boggs Kane’ohe
Eekadog 07:33, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
Hello! You look like someone who might be interested in joining the Biography WikiProject and so I thought I'd drop you a line and invite you! We'd love to have you help us :-) LarryQ 23:03, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
For your reply and I totally respect your decision to stay removed from the debate for now, which looks at though it has dies down for the time being. Happy editing! Tiamut 16:54, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
Hi, I noticed you either attended or is attending Johns Hopkins University. I was wondering if you have access to articles in Project MUSE, and would be willing to help me download an article. What I'm looking for in particular is this - . Let me know if you can help. Thanks. Hong Qi Gong (Talk - Contribs) 04:54, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
Please keep an eye on Talk:Hawaiian sovereignty movement/Temp and help improve it. —Viriditas | Talk 02:05, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
I noticed you replaced Kuykendall's opinion with your own opinion. I'm not sure I feel comfortable with that. I'm new to Wikipedia but from what I've learned, editors ought to cite the opinions of others - not their own. In addition, you write that "historian Russ 'notes'". The word "notes" bestows extra weight on his arguments and give the statement a gloss of authority. Presenting the information as, "...Historian Russ argues..." is neutral and a more accurate description of what all historians do. Please consider reverting back. Mahalo --Yosemitesam25 (talk) 04:14, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
You replaced this:
"According to historian Ralph S. Kuykendall, "The proximate cause of the Revolution of January 17, 1893, was the attempt by Queen Liliuokalani on the previous Saturday afternoon, January 14, to promulgate a new constitution which she had prepared"[8]
With your own opinion:
"The precipitating event driving the revolution of January 17, 1893 was the attempt by Queen Liliuokalani to promulgate a new constitution which she had prepared"
You've replaced Kuykendall's words with your own interpretation of his words and removed his name; reverting a nice, clean, neutral contrast between the "arguments" of two historians. (That is, between Kuykendall and Russ)
Secondly, check your use of the word "note". Why not use the neutral word "argue"?
Last, Do you happen to have a page number for Russ? I haven't read his book(s) but I'll order it tomorrow. Mahalo--Yosemitesam25 (talk) 05:02, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
Re: page number: I'm assuming that it's page 90. I saw that but didn't realize that it was the page number. Thanks for pointing that out.
Second, "pointless rehashing". I thought Wikipedia encouraged editors to work out wording on the talk pages. A discussion as this is healthy and productive.
Third: "as there is no controversy whatsoever that the proximate cause was the proposed new constitution". Then why did you feel you had to change his wording (which said that very thing)?
Fourth: you haven't responded to the questionable use of "note". I take that to mean you are in agreement with me.
Fifth:I feel more comfortable with the previous language. It was a direct quote from Kuykendall that you yourself (as stated above)feel is non-controversial. Your edit is your interpretation of Kuykendall.
Sixth: I agree that various historians may reach the same conclusions. That doesn't mean they are always interchangeable. They word their tomes differently and even small differences can carry enormous weight.
I've provided valid reasons why the previous wording was preferred. I have done this *before* editing. I am now going to change it. If, after having read this, you still feel compelled to alter it, please lay out your reasoning *before* changing the encyclopedia article (as I did). Mahalo.--Yosemitesam25 (talk) 12:06, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
Please review WP:AVOID, Specifically, section 2.1.2. The section reminds us: "These words (i.e. "note") are often used to elevate one side in a dispute by bestowing extra weight on its arguments."
In much the same way, you've bestowed extra weight on the aspect of "the underlying motivations" by: 1) Replacing the phrase "proximate cause" with "precipitating event". 2) Removing Kuykendall's name and authority as a scholar
Moreover, you still haven't answered the question as to why you changed it in the first place. In fact, you said just above that, "...there is no controversy whatsoever that the proximate cause was the proposed new constitution."
That stated, is there any more accurate way for the article to read?
I appreciate your honest efforts to improve this article. Mahalo--Yosemitesam25 (talk) 23:45, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
Please review WP:AVOID.
1) Section 2.3 covers the word "despite". Using "despite" when two alternatives are contrasted is "dubious use implying preference”. You wrote "despite the fact that no apparent threat existed."
2) Section 2.2 covers the word "supposed". Using "supposed" is dubious as it casts doubt upon an assertion. You wrote, "informed about the supposed threats".
3) Section covers the word "however". Using "however" when two alternatives are contrasted is "dubious use implying preference”.
4) You inserted the word "hyperbole" to describe the reference cited. This is your opinion. It is an evaluative term serving to advance your position. see WP:NOR
Please review WP:ASF
1) You wrote, "despite the fact that no apparent threat existed." This is your opinion. You have not attributed it to anyone or to any verifiable source. In fact, you inserted into directly into a sourced, verifiable fact about an opinion which states: "At the request of many citizens, whose wives and families were helpless and in terror of an expected uprising of the mob, which would burn and destroy, a request was made and signed by all of the committee, addressed to Minister Stevens, that troops might be landed to protect houses and private property." By substituting your opinion in this way you mislead the reader into thinking that the sourced opinion matches yours, when in fact, they are opposite.
2) You wrote, "informed about the supposed threats". "Supposed" is your opinion. You have not attributed it to anyone or to any verifiable source. In fact, you inserted into directly into a sourced, verifiable fact about an opinion which states: "At the request of many citizens, whose wives and families were helpless and in terror of an expected uprising of the mob, which would burn and destroy, a request was made and signed by all of the committee, addressed to Minister Stevens, that troops might be landed to protect houses and private property." By substituting your opinion in this way you mislead the reader into thinking that the sourced opinion matches yours when in fact, they are opposite.
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If you feel compelled to assert that there was no threat Wikipedia allows for you to do that by attributing that opinion to someone (a verifiable source). Otherwise it is just speculation and opinion on your part. WP:NOR states: " Wikipedia is not the place to publish your own opinions or experiences." —Preceding unsigned comment added by Yosemitesam25 (talk • contribs) 18:29, 25 February 2008 (UTC) Mahalo--Yosemitesam25 (talk) 18:57, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
Please see the talk page for the overthrow article. Please see WP:YESPOV Mahalo--Yosemitesam25 (talk) 01:53, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
Just wondering if you knew off hand...During the overthrow, how close were the American citizens' houses to the location in which the Marines decided to station themselves? Eekadog (talk) 04:15, 26 February 2008 (UTC)
--Yosemitesam25 (talk) 00:05, 1 March 2008 (UTC)== Yosemitesam25 ==
Is it your opinion that this is an alternate account of JK? —Viriditas | Talk 05:55, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
Yes, that is my operating assumption, but I am not 100% certain. There are a couple of things that seem like dead giveaways (email me if you want details). Although assuming this is the case, it would seem the newfound veil of anonymity has turned a "problem editor" into someone even less constructive and less amenable to reason. In short, I'm starting to think "big problem". Arjuna (talk) 08:55, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
What I would like for us to do, is to file an incident report at Wikipedia:Conflict of interest/Noticeboard. But let us all familiarize ourselves with the procedures on that page before putting together a report. —Viriditas | Talk 08:43, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
Arjuna: I may have inadvertantly stopped the template from showing. That was an innocent mistake. --Yosemitesam25 (talk) 00:05, 1 March 2008 (UTC)
Howzit! Please let me know specific areas that need help (that goes for everybody of course). I have real limited time these days, but I'll try my best. Mahalo to you and everyone for keeping up this awesome work! A hui hou! --Laualoha 14:37, 5 March 2008 (UTC)
Arjuna909 (block log • active blocks • global blocks • contribs • deleted contribs • filter log • creation log • change block settings • unblock • checkuser (log))
Request reason:
I request an unblock, as I did not violate 3RR. I had only 3 reverts on the article in question in a 24 hour period: 23:29, 7 March 2008; 00:07, 8 March 2008; and 00:35, 8 March 2008. Indeed, I was the one who reported a 3RR violation by User:Yosemitesam25. UPDATE: Apparently I am blocked not for 3RR but for "edit warring". I didn't understand this previously, my apologies. However, I wish to appeal this decision also. User:Yosemitesam25 has been engaged in repeated blatant POV pushing on this and other related articles, and despite repeated discussions with him by myself and other editors on the article talk pages; these discussions have proven fruitless. His pattern of behavior has continued -- leading up to his most recent 3RR. Despite his awareness that his edits have no consensus, he repeatedly reinserts POV material, deletes consensus material, and just generally is unamenable to discussion as to why his edits are inappropriate. I can provide ample support and documentation for these assertions. Moreover, Yosemite is seen by myself and other editors as having possible WP:COI issues, and he has declined to answer questions in this regard despite repeated requests and notifications (there may also be sockpuppet issues but we do not know because of the refusal to answer questions).
Decline reason:
You're not blocked for 3RR, you're blocked for edit-warrning. Further, 3RR is not an entitlement to revert thrice a day. MaxSem(Han shot first!) 22:02, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
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As i think i explained to yosemite, I'm not him, and he's not me. I left a message on his page asking him to relent, and c'mon, man, you know I wouldn't sock puppet or not attribute edits to my name. I'm on wiki break, so if you want to respond, please email. I'll be back in a few months, but if you'd like help reverting yosemite's changes, email me and I'll help you get past 3RR. c/m/t --03:47, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
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