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Hi Angus! Would you mind re-reviewing the Qustodio (software) post. I removed the annoying bolding and tried to make it way more boring! Appreciate it. Thanks! Jallerso
Jallerso (talk) 09:54, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
Hi Angus, thanks for the feedback. I was following Slack's model of one site for software and one for the company, but I think you are right. It is overkill for us. Will combine and try again.
Jallerso (talk) 14:49, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
AngusWOOF I took your advice and have combined them. Would you mind giving the new combined page a review? Draft:Qustodio
Meanwhile I will delete the old software and company posts. Thanks again! Jallerso (talk) 15:40, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
Hi AngusWOOF, I added the secondary source information about Kazoo magazine to the other Kazoo magazine page that was previously created by someone else. I do have a disclosed conflict of interest. Still objectively (if that is possible) I believe that this magazine that has been featured in national print and radio, including Vogue (https://www.vogue.com/article/kazoo-magazine-erin-bried-editor-interview), The New York Times (https://www.nytimes.com/guides/gifts/2020-holiday-gift-guide/category/kids), NPR radio (https://www.nhpr.org/post/bikinis-burkinis-acting-sick-kazoo-magazine#stream/0), Crains Business (https://www.crainsnewyork.com/article/20170217/SMALLBIZ/170219889/meet-the-publishing-veteran-who-crowdfunded-a-magazine-just-for-girls-on-science-sports-and-writing-instead-of-pr), Folio magazine https://www.foliomag.com/kazoo-magazine-girls-think-bigger/), among others, and has also been three-time finalist by ASME (The American Society of Magazine Editors) for an Ellie award, which is the highest magazine industry award, for the best magazine of the year, winning the National Magazine Award once, is deserving of its own page. :) Kazoo doesn't have a publicist so I'm not that person but I'm trying to do this correctly. Thank you. ----
Thanks for your guidance on getting my submission of the Natashia Deon page sorted. I "think" I edited it correctly. In addition to removing embedded external links and making them Wikipedia links I also found a couple more sources and removed all of the links that linked to her website or writing. And removed anything I didn't have a citation for. Hope I got it all right. Fingers crossed.
Luckyme2020 (talk) 23:11, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
I have read WP:NOTBOOK and found the following criteria: The book has been the subject of two or more non-trivial published works appearing in sources that are independent of the book itself. This can include published works in all forms, such as newspaper articles , other books, television documentaries, bestseller lists, and reviews. This excludes media re-prints of press releases, flap copy, or other publications where the author, its publisher, agent, or other self-interested parties advertise or speak about the book.
Then why asking specifically for book reviews? I am not geeting Kartik0976 (talk) 02:28, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
Thanks I understood Kartik0976 (talk) 17:01, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
The articles Draft:List of accolades received by The Fault in Our Stars and Draft:List of awards and nominations received by Thuppakki needed for split request. But I am not familar with the process to split articles.122.174.27.68 (talk) 06:02, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
Good Day, I hope you are doing amazing.
I have read your comment on the article for Yassin Hall. Declining an article is understandable on certain grounds. I politely would like to ask to please elaborate on what grounds this article is being denied. If something "seems" to be a certain way, it is an assumption otherwise it would "be" a certain way as a fact. No Wikipedia rules and regulations state that the journalists who wrote those articles are not free to write about someone/something as they please. Liable news media outlets have been listed to support the the drafted article. This Wikipedia article has not used any adjectives that are evaluating neither the individual nor the individual's work.
I appreciate you. Didi
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This page is based on a national party in Nepal. I have created it and included sufficient reference. Please help reviewing and publishing it than disapproving. Creating consensus on this matter is very difficult as people in Nepal love to be updated of these topics than showing their point of view or tilt on topic. Hence, please help me review and publish it.103.10.28.182 (talk) 18:11, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
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A split for the article The Fault in Our Stars (film) into List of accolades received by The Fault in Our Stars cannot be made due to WP:SIZESPLIT, but there is a draft under the same name, which can be moved and merged into that article. Could you notify it.182.65.187.84 (talk) 05:19, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
Hi, hope you are doing good. I didn't decline this because of good sourcing currently present in the article. This revision was really a refbomb. Now it looks OK. TheBirdsShedTears (talk) 03:58, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
Hi Angus. Can you give me a suggestion for what I can add to the Harlis Sweetwater page to make it more verifiable?
G Schwind 22 (talk) 03:54, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
Thank you for helping me while creating my first article. Scribbbblr (talk) 06:05, 11 August 2021 (UTC) |
Hi AngusWOOF, thank you for your comment on my draft article. I did remove any section of the article that could sound subjective. The draft article should now only contain facts, verifiable by reputable references. Please check the changes below and if you have any other questions, let me know. Best, Nick
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Aziz_Tazi
— Preceding unsigned comment added by Nickazzemani (talk • contribs) 22:34, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
Hi AngusWOOF,
Thank you for your reply. I don't know if you saw the most recent draft but it seems like many of the issues you talk about have already been taken care of.
I need to clarify: the page never said "first Moroccan-born film director in history". It said, "first Moroccan-born director to get Hollywood distribution". Moroccan filmmakers usually get their work released in Morocco or at best, in the French-speaking world but Aziz Tazi was the first ever to get distribution through a major studio like Lionsgate. I am not the one that claims it. Sources are available here [1], [2] and [3].
Regarding your comments on the use of "award-winning" and "press", I just edited the draft as you requested. The name drops are not just promotional - it was to show the person's legitimacy. A film director is judged by the notoriety of the actors that work with him. If someone who is highly distinguished such as Mickey Rourke worked with him (and also praised him [4]), isn't it worth noting? Regardless, I removed the mention about Variety and HuffPost writing about him. I followed your instructions about the education part as well. Please check but I really made sure that every statement in the article is accompanied by external verifiable sources. A few are offline but that's because they were in print media. I can submit scans of those articles but I was told I shouldn't because of copyright issues. I hope the reviewers can find these print articles on their own.
As for other notable work, the documentary series "Arab Stories" was aired on national television, the film Imago opened an international film festival, and his music videos have millions of views on Youtube. He was in Forbes Africa's 30 Under 30 - that means that he was one of 30, out of the more than a billion people who live in the entire continent of Africa, to be selected by a reputable news source such as Forbes to be on this list. Doesn't all of that warrant a page? I know you guys don't like to make the comparison but I can link to Wikipedia pages of people with half his achievements. In fact, I have seen pages of two people who literally worked under Aziz Tazi on two projects. I understand the need to ensure notability but I hope the changes I made and links I added, helps prove that this person does indeed deserve a page.
Nickazzemani (talk) 18:00, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
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Hi AngusWOOF,
Thanks again for helping me with this submission. I made sure to modify the article with all the changes you requested. I also got some help on the Live WikiHelp to remove all the excessive details, name dropping, and unnecessary elements. I adjusted the formatting by italicizing all the movie titles too. According to the person who helped me, there is a chance for approval this time! Of course, you have the final word. Hopefully, you agree too but please let me know if there is anything else you think needs to be changed. Best, Nick
Nickazzemani (talk) 23:59, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
I did submit it. It says "awaiting review" right now. Just wanted to let you know in case you wanted to be the one in charge of it but yes, I understand that any AFC reviewer can check it out. Hopefully, it's suitable for everyone. Thanks again for your help throughout this process.
Nickazzemani (talk) 06:51, 12 August 2021 (UTC)
Hey AngusWOOF,
Happy Tuesday! Thanks for your feedback on the Sam Rosenthal article. I read through some more Wiki guides, particular the Notability one, to better understand what needs to be improved. Went ahead and added some modifications, particularly to help meet the guidelines listed under the "Additional Criteria", which seems to be part of what was missing. In particular, I added an additional accolade + citation to address the bullet of awards/nominations for the criteria under "Any Biography". In this case, I believe the subject would also fall under the "Creative Professional" bucket; the reason I've left some of the prior secondary news references in is because (from my understanding) they help support line items 3 (created or played a major role in co-creating a significant or well-known work or collective body of work) and 4 (won significant critical attention).
Let me know if this interpretation is correct or if there's additional work I can do to improve this further. Thanks again! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Candlesonfire (talk • contribs) 16:53, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
I have referenced the reliable news website(s) of India. Please help me to find out which sources are marked as unreliable. I will edit them as soon as possible. Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Scribbbblr (talk • contribs) 06:06, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
Scribbbblr, see WP:ORGCRIT. Several of the sources are corporate directory listings. The Startup Lab is a promotional website. AsiaNews.in is also promotional. That leaves just two articles and those only talk about the company briefly with regards to receiving a funding round. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 14:34, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
Hi. You this week rejected my draft article on Louisa Gann, and I would appreciate it if you could expand your reasons. I can understand that you might think her of minor interest, although I feel her achievements compare well with those of some other subjects of articles on Wikipedia, and will delete the article on these grounds if you say so. Before doing so, though I wonder if you could advise me, for the sake of future articles I might write (a) what is wrong with my writing style, that "it sounds like it was copied from a book"? (This articles is all in my own original words.) and (b) what is wrong with published PhD theses as sources? (surely, since these dissertations have been reviewed by knowledgeable academics before publication, they are suitable for citation? Your advice would be appreciated, as I have a few more draft articles I am preparing to submit. Regards, JMHhistorian (talk) 12:13, 12 August 2021 (UTC)JMHHistorian
Hi AngusWOOF. Many thanks for taking the time to advise. Very helpful. JMHhistorian (talk) 10:28, 13 August 2021 (UTC)JMHHistorian
My page was deleted saying it promotes company, group etc. Please let me know what all things should be corrected so that I can edit accordingly.
Thank you. Anu380 (talk) 10:22, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
Hey can you please help me with the article you declined for Champ Da General. I put more references on the edit tab. Thanks for any feedback. DemoGirls (talk) 00:41, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
I would appreciate any feedback on this. I think it's ready for the mainspace but at the same I also have some doubts. Btspurplegalaxy (talk) 00:11, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
Hello Angus. Thanks for taking the time to review my submission. On the two comments that you mentioned, I wanted to ask your opinion on how to ensure that the information of Mr. Pulido shows when you visit the club´s wikipedia article. (Apparently the information is in fact listed in https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Millonarios_F%C3%BAtbol_Club and https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anexo:Presidentes_de_Millonarios_F%C3%BAtbol_Club, although I notice thses are listed only in spanish. Do you think I should link or make a citation relating to these specific articles? As for the references, I will fix them once I learn how to update since I´m not very savy using the code editing platform. Thanks and look forward to your reply. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 181.61.208.191 (talk • contribs) 20:51, 12 August 2021 (UTC)
Angus, thanks for taking the time to respond. Will revise and resubmit once it´s ok. Cheers! BTW, I did find a list of Millonarios FC presidents but only in ES, maybe I´ll have to cite that since there´s no other. Thanks! And thank you for the help with the references!
Hi Angus, I have updated the information according to your suggestions/indications and have linked, as I commented, the articles containing the information. Could you please take one more look at the article which I have already resubmitted? I´d really appreciate any feedback you may consider. Thanks!
Hi,
I created this page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Aditya_Tiwari with more references. The earlier version of this page was deleted not because it was not notable, but because it contained similar information to a previously deleted page that was poorly cited.
I request you to kindly look into it with more sensitivity and revive the page.
This writer, author, and activist has brought about significant change in the queer space in a country like India, where “queer rights” are a lot more necessary and required. This page qualifies and should be included on Wikipedia because this person has sufficient notability to be here. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Plushwiki21 (talk • contribs) 22:52, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
Hi, Can you please remove the rejection notice from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Aditya_Tiwari So that I can resend it for approval? thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Plushwiki21 (talk • contribs) 00:48, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
Hi AngusWOOF,
Please remove the rejection notice from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Aditya_Tiwari so that I can re-submit it for approval. I have written to the AFD'ers that Aditya Tiwari is more notable now. Allow me to kindly make minor edits and resubmit it, thanks. Really appreciate your help! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Plushwiki21 (talk • contribs) 23:59, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
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Thanks for the help, even though it kinda stung. I hope you're not allergic to chocolate LmbrJckBear84 (talk) 04:02, 28 August 2021 (UTC) |
Hello! Would you mind reviewing Draft: List of Saekano: How to Raise a Boring Girlfriend volumes again? I've added chapter names for two of the manga adaptations, and added the volume lists of the other spin-offs. Harushiga (talk)
Hi, I'm confused as to why my article is being nominated for deletion under the justification that "there is already a section in the main article for that". In a similar case, there is a section for "Stings" in the main "Bee" article, but another article specifically for "Bee Stings". The same basic principle is there, but my article is being argued for deletion.
The other reason for deletion is arguing the subject does not have enough content to be its own article, despite there being a Bee Sting page, and an entire page called "Insect Bites and Stings".
Both links: Bee Sting, Insect bites and stings
Thanks,
Eye ay en (talk) 19:33, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
AngusWOOF Yes, declined, that's my mistake. But there are individual articles for bee sting even though there is a section for "Stings" in the main article. Why is my submission declined while the other article isn't? I don't understand why I'd talk about it at Mosquito when you declined it, and when the section for "stings" in Bee sting is still there. Also, the talk page for mosquito is reserved solely for improvement to the mosquito article. (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Mosquito)
Eye ay en (talk) 23:21, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
What? The page for bee and bee stings both exist. I checked both the "Bee" talk page & archives and there was no asking to make a bee sting article. Why should I have to ask if they didn't?
Thanks sir for your reply, sir i removed this three references, can you please help me which reference is suitable for this page Himanshu7777 (talk) 20:06, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
sir please check following link: https://g.co/kgs/KgRof6 this song list not generated by artist. http://www.itunescharts.net/us/search/?query=Shahjahan+Shamim https://digsty.com/search/?qf=network:twitter%20country:bd%20category:musician https://digsty.com/search/?qf=country:bd%20category:influencer https://www.shazam.com/track/580470391/dynamite Sir please check following link also https://popnable.com/bangladesh https://www.yolodaily.com/we-should-change-the-pattern-of-music-videos-shahjahan-shamim/ https://www.yolodaily.com/success-story-of-a-multi-talented-musician-and-author-in-bangladesh-shahjahan-shamim/ https://www.google.com/search?sxsrf=AOaemvKhuPoc6IBpq2_k5uwz2IZmHXnWbQ:1630095727288&q=Shahjahan+Shamim&stick=H4sIAAAAAAAAAONgFuLSz9U3MCqqyshIU-LVT9c3NEwziLessqwy0VLPTrbST00pTU4syczP0y_NyyxLLSrOLKm0yssvSUzKSVVIzCnNzct8xBjGLfDyxz1hKd9Ja05eY3TnIlankAQXm2teCVBCiE-KhwvJLVZMGkw8i1gFgjMSM7ISMxLzFICs3MzcCWyMAN9oiYW1AAAA&sa=X Sir please check his song was streaming in I heart radio. https://www.iheart.com/artist/shahjahan-shamim-36461133/ Himanshu7777 (talk) 20:43, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
Hello sir, I have resubmitted the article again with references. please sir check this page again. as a proof for major record label please check apple music links buttom of the page it's shown record label name, I think from this screenshot you can easily check https://i.ibb.co/PMCNsNc/Apple-Shamim.jpg Himanshu7777 (talk) 17:18, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
Thanks sir your reply. I read carefully Criteria for musicians and ensembles in Wikipedia. There are few points and they stated like this Musicians or ensembles (this category includes bands, singers, rappers, orchestras, DJs, musical theatre groups, instrumentalists, etc.) may be notable if they meet at least one of the following criteria. And I think he passed this point: released songs on major record label. Yes his music played on BBC music radio; he got an email from BBC radio. And his one music covered in one television program and telecast on Bangladesh national television.Himanshu7777 (talk) 15:10, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
sorry sir typing mistake i got, and i will research about television and radio references, what's about song released on major record label? Himanshu7777 (talk) 15:48, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
How do I delete my Wikipedia account as soon as possible? Please send my directions to larryvnash@yahoo.com. Thanks I'm through with wiki.
— Preceding unsigned comment added by Larryvnash (talk • contribs) 09:17, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
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Hello,
Thanks for the notes on the submission. Would it be possible to help sort out what sort of sources wikipedia needs? This is my first actual addition that was not to a previously published article, so I am not sure what is needed.
It is a magazine I purchase and find all the time in the shops here, so it seems it should have a page, and tried to add the info other sites and magazines have, so I welcome your input, especially since you seem to know a lot about how articles and additions should be structured.
Thanks again, and appreciate all the advice. I am excited to add more to wikipedia going forward! Zune4ever (talk) 12:53, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
I understand that, that is why I included the details about the E3 judging and Gamescom since it demonstrates international details about the magazine. I included many of the things I saw on other magazines such as PcgamesN (also a site I love), Polygon etc. But since this is my first submission I want to ensure I do things right, so any guidance on what those magazine articles have that I am missing. Would rather do it right, then be lazy and miss important information. Thanks for all the help. Zune4ever (talk) 13:25, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
I have deleted my article sections on Larry Nash yet this person who goes by the name of J Larry Nash is using my Wikipedia Profile to lead my intended traffic to his attention. https://en.everybodywiki.com/Larry_Nash. I believe actors connected to Discogs.com and Amazon are leading this campaign of deception. My Wikipedia article is not present here but it still appears on the link above, how do you combat this type of situation? Larryvnash (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
I am attempting to completely delete my Wikipedia account but Wikipedia is reporting to me that the page that contains an artist template has not been deleted although it is not visible. How do I get to potions that are hidden? My goal is to completely remove myself from Wikipedia. Larryvnash (talk) 13:57, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
Hello AngusWOOF thanks for reviewing my article which I created for John-James JJ on the 2nd September. I think he is a noteworthy person to have a wiki article. He is not a judge on Strictly Come Dancing but is consistently asked by the BBC to review the professional dancers on a talk radio show which airs on a regularly basis once Strictly Come Dancing is on. He has also had a beer named after him. Can you advise me what I need to do to get the article accepted please? Thanks 94.173.188.137 (talk) 11:15, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
Hi AngusWOOF, Thank you for reviewing my article on Deborah Santana and for alerting me to the problems with using IMDb as a source (I was not aware and I am grateful to you for letting me know!). I have removed all the IMDb sources and found some new ones from more credible sources instead, as well as made some changes to the wording. Can you please take a look and let me know if I am on the right track, or if I should make further changes? Thanks so much, --Moviecat (talk) 05:19, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
Just to let you know, editor AngusWOOF, Viacom is now a disambiguation page. So when you link to the company, the way you did at Dee Bradley Baker filmography, please use:
|author-link1=Viacom (2005–2019)
Thank you for your many edits and for your support in this! P.I. Ellsworth - ed. put'r there 10:34, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
Request you to illaborate the reason for rejection of the page so that I can make necessary changes. The reference part is all from media articles which is unrelated. I do not understand the problem there. Would make neutral point of view for sure.
— Preceding unsigned comment added by Melophile1711 (talk • contribs) 05:28, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
Hi, thanks for reviewing the Somalaya article. It has been accepted on the Dutch Wikipedia so why would a translation not be acceptable?
Shelter692000 (talk) 15:28, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
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AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 20:47, 15 September 2021 (UTC)Information on split from SPB and another split in 2020 is given in the history section. Rsakib188 (talk) 20:37, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
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About: Iranian Cheetah Society (September 2) Hello Angus, Thanks for reviewing this page. you mentioned that "This reads like the group's site map.". just 2 of 9 references are from our website. one of them is "about us" page which I think is essential for reference. other references are well-known websites in wildlife conservation like WLT and IUCN and CATSG. others are well-known media. How can I improve my referencing? I can just add scientific articles but they are not directly about the organization. They are about research results. Also, This is the oldest and well-known Iranian NGO active in wildlife conservation.
Thanks --Persian.palas (talk) 09:00, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
Thanks for the reply. As I mentioned, 7 from 9 references were independent. Also, Asiatic Cheetah page mentioned the society as it is the reference for Asiatic cheetah. The guardians, Tehran Times, and BBC wildlife are known newspapers. I used other organizations' pages as draft.
Persian.palas (talk) 14:39, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
Hi AngusWOOF (bark, sniff),
I sent the message below to Bkissin on 05:10, 11 September 2021 (UTC)Skyyak. Please let me know if you have any advice on how to proceed on this submission after the decline for Copywrited material: "Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless... you attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations,.."
To Bkissin (11 September 2021): "I just ran the Heritage Yak article through Quetext https://www.quetext.com/results/941ce5830c5e85983b98 and got about 8 sentences identified. 6 of these are followed by citations. I will shortly rephrase the 8th sentence discussing: "both sexes have long shaggy hair with a dense woolly undercoat to insulate them from the cold. This may form a long "skirt" that can reach the ground." and provide an original citation. Can you give me any other tips to remove your rejection "because it included copyrighted content". Please help. Warmly, --Skyyak (talk) 05:10, 11 September 2021 (UTC)Skyyak"
I also thank you for your previous comment that you would love to accept our World Heritage Yak Conservancy submission. That was very encouraging. Perhaps WHYC isn't notable quite yet, but maybe Heritage Yak are.
Looking forward to your feedback.
Warmly,
Dear Angus, I understand very well your deletion of my article.
The text that I wrote is exactly the same as the text written in this Wikipedia article below https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Michael_Langston
Mr. Michael works as a professor at a university, and I work also as a lecturer in a reputable university. Mr. Michael work in research field of Artificial Intelligence and Machine Learning, and I work also in the research field of the same topics. Mr. Michael has multiple publications and he mentioned only 1 reference, and also I have multiple publications and I mentioned 1 reference.
May I know why my article is deleted while the article of Mr. Michael is available online.
I'm willing to listen to you, know what wrong I am doing and to correct my mistakes. My ultimate goal is to have my profile published on Wikipedia.
I truly believe that my article is notable (unique), I am not advertising myself, and I have an important award, and a very notable invention in the field of education.
--MohammadElMedawar (talk) 10:24, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
If you can notice, the request to be deleted has been raised today after I pointed his article. But, it has been online since 2006 without anyone noticing. Again, I don't want to delete his article. What I want is a person who can help me publish my own article. 1- Can you do that for me? 2- If not you, can you recommend anyone to help me with that? MohammadElMedawar (talk) 14:30, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
You tell me "see Other Stuff" but I didn't understand what do I need to do with it? please elaborate more. MohammadElMedawar (talk) 14:46, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
Hello AngusWOOF! Thank you for reviewing my article and leaving a comment for me there. It's my first Wikipedia draft and I need some help. I picked up the topic from the list of requested articles, so does that still leave a possibility of it being neological? Also, can you please explain how the references are not "independent, reliable, published sources"? I really appreciate your feedback because it will help me learn. Thank you!
Amandawil (talk) 10:52, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
Thank you for the clarification. Both the terms are similar but not necessarily synonymous. Let me explain how:
Dose-response can be defined as "The relationship between the amount of exposure [dose] to a substance and the resulting changes in body function or health (response)."
On the other hand, dose-effect can be defined as "The relationship between the dose of harm-producing substances or factors and the severity of their effect on exposed organisms or matter."
Dose-response is used to describe how a substance stimulates a (biological or biochemical) response in an organism. This substance could be beneficial or toxic for the organism. Alternatively, dose-effect is used to describe the severity of a toxic substance's harmful effect.
Amandawil (talk) 15:52, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
Sure, thanks, I will add that to my draft! I have also started a discussion on the talk page of dose response and will now be waiting for responses on it. Thank you for your help.
Amandawil (talk) 16:58, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
Thanks for comments. 1. Dua is Khushali's family name. Have added it for better clarity 2. Times of India Content This is challenging because Khushali lived in Delhi for a long time and her marriage and her 30th birthday party was covered by entertainment reporters of Times. It is hard to find other sourcing for her correct date of birth. It can only be edfiniteively inferred from her big 30th birthday bash in Delhi (24th Dec, 2012) which was covered by Times of India. Other than this definitive, contemporaneous reporting, there is no other source. Instead celeb biodata sites give her a much younger year of birth.
Please help. ThanksOCDorNOT (talk) 06:24, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
Gabby's range got blocked again, this time for 2 years. wizzito | say hello! 03:44, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
Hi Angus, WCWINANS here, I saw you left a note on the article I contributed. any COI has been disclosed as per wiki instructions and the article is well-cited from the best neutral point of view possible without advertising or promotion. Thanks for feedback. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wcwinans (talk • contribs) 17:10, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
I am a new user and i want to know that can a extended confirmed user can move a article to Draft because user:Kazamzam moved my article Ahmer Javed to draft can he do this thank you HASIM66 (talk) 18:27, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
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Thank you for your support. Seems like I can't add references that can be seen by adm. Could you please help me with this one? Thanks! VijayWayne (talk) 08:57, 16 October 2021 (UTC) |
Hi WOOF! Hope you're fine. You declined this article. Can you see that whether this is now right? I've corrected my mistakes. Thanks. || Tajwar.thesuperman 💬 04:26, 7 October 2021 (UTC)
Those are your choices. If you don't understand them, you may ask for an explanation at the Teahouse. Improving and resubmitting the draft is not one of the choices. Do not improve and resubmit the draft. If you resubmit the draft again, I will have to make a report to WP:ANI, which I do not want to do. But the topic really is a locked redirect, and you will be disrupting if you continue to resubmit it. Robert McClenon (talk) 20:23, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
I just wanted to say that I've already made the requested corrections to the draft of my page for "Pink Fantasy". So if you could check if indeed everything necessary is there, I would appreciate it. I also take the opportunity to say that I've resubmitted the request so that the page can be published on Wikipedia. Thank you.
VicenteWiki (talk) 18:14, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
What criteria of notability does this meet? I would like to know, it will help me with my future draft reviews. Ta. --Gryllida (talk, e-mail) 01:39, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
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Hi, I just submitted a new page (first time post / long time listener). It's for a business I've founded over a decade ago - I just realized we never got a wikipedia page going for it. we're similar to Mindbody_Inc.. We have over 2,000 clients as of now, and we're growing fast, so this isn't a fly by night type thing. I wanted to start building a reference for our history and the help we're doing in the community.
Any advice you can give me on the starter page I have built? I modeled it off of Mindbody - trying to keep it completely factual. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dan.uyemura (talk • contribs) 16:30, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
Hi AngusWOOF, You declined my submission on Rules Based Motion, and your comments are both correct, pertinent, but unfortunately unresolvable. This is a new concept to reconcile the impossibility to explain how the wrist works when all the parts vary but the net output is consistent. The concept under pinned patents filed in 2000, as well as my PhD. It is clearly described as a neologism, and more /all of the background work is from our group. The wrist has been an impossible structure to resolve (and fix until now) due to is wide variation within the linkages and scatter-gram findings of empirical observations. This new concept has led to a surgical approach that is becoming a standard repair, but the Rule Based Motion notion is beyond most colleagues comprehension. Given your comment, I do not think this is resolvable and one of the challenges I have accepted of pushing out new concepts to question old incumbent and unworkable ideas. My thought was that Wikipedia could provide some notion that it was worth considering as way to reconcile the empirical vs conceptual explanations for such systems - and thus allow input form others in other fields. Maybe it could be aired, but with lots of disclaimers. You are right it is pulled off my thesis and other articles, but they contained the considered and required text, with some additional material. Thanks for the quick response, but unless it can be considered largely as it is, not worth resubmitting. Worth a try for me, but will not be able to address your concerns - as they were quite correct. MJSMJSandow (talk) 02:22, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
The term "Rules Based Motion" has not extended much beyond the research teams, patent offices and numerous meeting presentations, and is definitely not a widely used term. If someone hears the term and looks for a simple definition and knowledge starting point, then it is now a standard to look to Wikipedia. This is seen as a gateway to find more information, and references to validate the concept. I would have no issue with disclaimers, but it is a Neologism, but an important suggestion to address a biomechanical conundrum. I thought a Wikipedia post may allow others to access the concept, and even refute it, but at least advance the discussion. Few scientists would regard Wikipedia as the bastion of facts, but it is a great conduit to collect ideas, gather thoughts and allow an understanding in a succinct format, which can direct to more "acceptable" peer reviewed material. From the previous discussion, it sounds like it is not suitable for Wikipedia, unless Wikipedia wants to also be is to be a gateway to new concepts (with appropriate disclaimers and qualifiers), before they are a standard.MJSandow (talk) 20:41, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
Hi AngusW🐶🐶F, this is the second day of proposing the Draft :Kaleb J. But why hasn't there been a review from the official editor as well? I hope the Draft:Kaleb J article turns into the Main Article. Not a draft article anymore Yemimas29 (talk) 00:20, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
An article I wrote about the chronic pain network was denied because it was said to not have reliable sources. I understand that one of the links in the article was to the organization's website itself (so I definitely understand that it would be considered biased), but the other sources were for a newspaper article and a government of Canada website (CIHR). I've looked at the guidelines for reliable sources, and I am still a little confused and was hoping you could provide some clarification on what would be considered more reliable. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 135.23.44.19 (talk) 20:12, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
For more explanation see WP:ORGCRIT, but you'll want to find at least 2-3 articles that will meet this "significant coverage in multiple reliable secondary sources that are independent of the subject." If newspapers have written up details on visiting CPN, you can use that. Hope that helps. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 23:10, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
File:DanTDM Trayaurus and the Enchanted Crystal.jpg | DanTDM fan-award |
Hello Angus! I heard that you edit DanTDM's page alsot so I gave you WikiLove because you are a big fan of him, so I gave you this! Lilkitty200 (talk) 22:34, 4 November 2021 (UTC) |
Hello, I have been following this artist for almost his entire career. I went to a show this past weekend and physically viewed his ID, so it most certainly is correct. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mother Disney (talk • contribs) 23:03, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
You did not explain why you changed his place of birth. It seems to be up for debate, and seems to be recently changed, based on the same reason of, Your own personal knowledge. It seems it should be left blank until it is confirmed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mother Disney (talk • contribs) 20:02, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
So does it seem correct to eliminate ‘an American singer-songwriter’ in the opening paragraph? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mother Disney (talk • contribs) 14:17, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
The terminology is misleading. He also plays these instruments consistently onstage and on recordings. ~~Mother Disney~~ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mother Disney (talk • contribs) 14:45, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
I heard about this guy a couple days ago and found out that (despite having an article on the French, German and Finnish Wikipedia) his article here was woefully incomplete (and a draft had been declined some months ago). So today I did my best, which you can see here. Now, I typically just write articles in mainspace (as I'm a NPP myself), but for this one I am not sure: I don't usually write BLPs (and am not very familiar with WP:NMUSIC), so I would appreciate having another pair of eyes on this. If you have any pointers I'd be glad to hear them. Best, jp×g 23:39, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
Siddhant Ghegadmal is an Indian model. No newspaper in his name. So what happened It is searched by millions of people on Google. A lot of people are demanding, they should have a Wikipedia article. Do a Google search for the site and then click on the cached link below the search results.
Please publish this article. If this is the case then people will not trust Wikipedia article — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2401:4900:52F8:E0C2:BAF3:E2CF:E36D:F7CF (talk) 18:23, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
Hi sir, how are you doing? I am a new user on Wikipedia and I am writing about Mr.Khattab who is a famous person in on social media networks in Iraq. I have this page: draft:Khattab F. Hussein I did all I can to publish it, also I did what you and others say. So, please can you accept it 🙏 It is up to you sir... Thank you anyway... K — Preceding unsigned comment added by Khattab Lord (talk • contribs) 23:35, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
Thanks for the quick review and the comments! I agree that more external sources are needed to show the notability of B CUBE and I will see if I can find some.
Apart from that, I wanted to ask if I did declare the COI correctly. Can I do it the way I did it on my user page, or should I do it differently? Blufisch1234 (talk) 07:26, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
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See WP:PLAINSIMPLECOI AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 18:30, 12 November 2021 (UTC)Dear Angus I've read your comments on my proposed entry "Historical bioarchaeology" and I would be glad if you could help me out on the following. First of all can you elaborate on why this term is a neologism? My proposed entry aimed at giving this term publicly since it is the combination of two subfields of research (in my study areas) and it is very often misunderstood. In addition to that I didn't promote any personal work but rather did initial research in order to contribute in Wikipedia in a detailed manner that followed both code of conduct and guidelines. Lastly, I cannot see how my detailed article is not sufficient for being published, while another less detailed and updated one has an entry of its own namely "Medieval bioarchaeology" (which also counts less words). Thank you in advance!
Best regards, Anna — Preceding unsigned comment added by Anna karligkioti (talk • contribs) 15:20, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
I may have found the first user sock of hers in a while.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Sockpuppet_investigations/Gabriella~four.3-6
wizzito | say hello! 07:30, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
Hello, I've realised that the Frankie Fusilli page will likely never exist so would a list of characters in The Sims 2 DS be more appropriate and if so should each character have independent citations or should there be sources for the list as a whole? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A00:23C7:5202:5F01:14DE:42BF:D895:60B4 (talk) 17:42, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
Basically the DS version of the game is completely different from other versions, sharing only the name - it's a hotel management game with established non-playable characters that give you tasks and are exclusive to this game. I can try to incorporate this information into the Sims 2 page if that would be more appropriate. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A00:23C7:5202:5F01:14DE:42BF:D895:60B4 (talk) 18:20, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
You rejected an article I wrote on this personality and it was mainly because of spam references...would like help in referencing the article for it to be posted — Preceding unsigned comment added by Maoyaw (talk • contribs) 13:06, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
Hi Angus WOOF. My brief submision to Hubble's Law page is intended as a math reference point ONLY, stating how Hubble's Constant is directly related to light speed (C) and Pi. There appears to be indecision and an indefinately long stalemate surrounding the numerical value of Hubble's Constant. An inclusion of thia would ease this problem, much in the same way Maxwell's equations clarified and settled the speed of light problem. Kind regards, ClownBojo
ClownBojo (talk) 19:41, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
Good day, I am the original editor of the draft for "Physiological reserve". I see that you have declined my submission. May I please ask you to elaborate as to the issue that made you see fit to decline the submission? The term, or one of its alternative names, is referenced in several Wikipedia articles, and the draft contains a number of references to medical texts and textbooks that also reference the term. Was it declined due to inadequate references? If so I can add additional references if necessary. For the record, I am not a medical professional, but I have a reasonably good general knowledge of medicine.
58.107.92.93 (talk) 05:31, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
Hello, AngusWOOF,
Any time you see a draft for this individual, please tag the page for deletion, as you just did. We protect lots of pages but he keeps coming up with new titles about articles on himself. Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Liz (talk • contribs) 06:37, 18 November 2021 (UTC)
Hi Angus. I just noticed your note on my Wikipedia talk page. I'm very confused as to where I was supposed to respond to your comment in order to contact you or speak to someone at Wikipedia for help with getting my article reviewed and verified, but I was hoping you could help me out. I do have a COI with the person I am submitting the page for -- I'm the son of the man who's the source of the article. However, I am very happy to submit my COI relation to the topic, but as you can see, all of my sources are backed by strongly verified publications, and I avoided using any sort of personal language. If it is easier to get the process of officially getting this page created by having someone else submit the page, please let me know and I can hire someone who has no personal connection to me or my father. But, it seems that even though Wikipedia urges against submitting articles for someone you know or someone you're related to, they still allow it and accept it -- and I'm hoping they will still accept my page submission. If you would like to respond via email, I would love to chat. My email is sjtiano12@gmail.com. Thanks again for your help.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Sjtiano12 (talk • contribs) 20:31, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
Hi Angus. Not really sure how to respond to your comments on the page itself - but the pictures I used were sent to me by my father himself, taken from hired photographers for our own personal use. Also, I added an Ancestry.com book made for my family which references birthdate, children, family life, etc. Also, I added his bio on First Republic bank website which further details his career. I can make other changes if necessary. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sjtiano12 (talk • contribs) 20:52, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
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Hello! The articles originally cited for this page were primarily East Coast, USA oriented but I have also gotten press from international media outlets (primarily from the UK) - Would the addition of this sort of international press be a valid resubmission? If not, no worries! Thank you! Orrubini (talk) 21:01, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
very low hit, on a Bloomberg Reference
I was expecting more than a cheap shot.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Machinery_Pete
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Religion and Mythology are two completely different topics. You need to properly read both subjects to realize that there is a distinction between both topics. The article "Efik religion" has over 70 references and the subtopics are not a photocopy of the work Efik mythology. Kindly revisit the work again. Your remark is as good as saying the page "Religion in ancient Rome" should be under "Roman Mythology". Iamosamudiame (talk) 13:56, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
Hi, thank you for the review & comment. I see how the academic notability is easily judged by full prof level, this article is about a young academic, basically too young to be a full prof (4 years from start of independent group). The contribution to the field is evident by number and impact of publications/ h-index = 32 (e.g. see https://scholar.google.com/citations?user=s4t6rssAAAAJ) and significant funding awarded. I am seeing a lot of pages for scientists with lesser impact (to what I can judge). I fully understand that there is a gender balance gap in wikipedia, and Jess Wade (Jesswade88) made a big contribution of logging female scientists, incl younger academics. With this page, I am also hoping to adequately present younger scientists in general, who are making impact into their research field. I am indeed strugling to source all the info, but I hope with an active page there will be more information and references added.
DrU1104 (talk) 17:43, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
Hi, Well, OK; I'm a PhD student, my field is ancient Greece, and the source I'm citing is a well-known ancient Greek text; the translation referred to is the one originally published in the Loeb series and is currently available in the Perseus project website of the Tufts University, both publishers being well-established in the field. It is standard practice in ancient Greek and Roman studies to refer merely to the ancient author (here, specifically, Plut. Them. 1.1), not to a secondary edition or translation, unless the particular edition or translation is under scrutiny, which is why I merely inserted a link, not details of the translation.
Admittedly, Neocles does not seem to have had a very remarkable role in history, other than being Themistocles' father.
JV3JV (talk) 18:37, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
Hi AngusWOOF. Thanks for your time and efforts in reviewing this article and helping me post in main space. Have a nice day. Gardenkur (talk) 11:04, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
Hi AngusWOOF. As the summary of article says, it is about the association of members practicing as lawyers in seven north eastern states of India. As these are small states, the members have a single Bar Council working for their interest. Hence request you to revert to its original name. Thanking in advance. Gardenkur (talk) 02:20, 27 November 2021 (UTC)
Take a Look at User_talk:120.144.23.170 they are adding all kinds of stuff, do you know what they are doing? Jena (talk) 00:58, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
oh Yah SatDis I forgot about you sorry ... the IP is also change the wiggle on wikidata too... Jena (talk) 00:18, 27 November 2021 (UTC)
Thanks for taking a look at my sandbox / AfC submission and taking the time!
Question: I understand Wikipedia isn't a place for just anyone (I have read and understand notability / neutrality, for example). I do believe she warrants consideration due to pioneering a concept that's in the marketing space and continues to have impact, and the sources I think are favorable when compared to a page such as Scott Brinker.
If you feel there's additional information needed, can you give me some feedback so I can do some additional work? Certainly open to learning from your constructive criticism.
Thanks again! SportsGuy17 (talk) 14:25, 18 November 2021 (UTC)
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