User:JoshuaHac/Wales in the Roman era
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[Feedback from Dr Austen - I completely agree with your choice to focus on re-writing this invasion and conquest section, since there were lots of issues - and the new section on Wales prior to the invasion is a really nice addition of important context. Your peer reviewer has already made some excellent points in terms of small details to tidy up in your next round of drafting, so I won't repeat those again, but I have added in a couple of extra thoughts below in brackets throughout the body of the text. If I was going to suggest something else to add, it might be nice to include a section on the key archaeological sites of the Welsh regions that relate to the Roman occupation? Remember you don't have to cover everything, but probably worth mentioning in some way? Good job!]
Edit of section "Invasion and conquest":