User:Goatmanatee/Manila galleon
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The article could be reorganized. The section titled "Spice Trade" discusses a trade route oriented around silver, not spice, and cover more than trade, such as the construction of ships. It could possibly be combined with the previous section in a larger section titled "History," broken down into subsections.
The article could also do more to emphasize the economy that sprang up to supply the voyage, such as mule trains, agriculture, inn keepers, and dock workers.
The article was neutrally written, but places more emphasis on the discovery of the route than the route itself.