User:Ameliamduncan/Roman client kingdoms in Britain
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[Feedback from Dr Austen - Some excellent additions here on what is a very complex topic! I like how you have carried on the clear organizational framework for the individual client kingdoms and made expansions in this area. Your peer reviewer makes some important grammar/syntax notes that you can tidy up in your next round of drafting. One thing I would add/look at - your new section on invasions and establishment of client kingdoms = I would add in some hyperlinks here to the main Wikipedia articles on these topics for further contextualization. I also wonder if there is anything more to be said about how these relationships changed over time or differed from one location to the next?]
Peer Review buddy: The sections I added or maybe just redefined I bolded the headings. If I added a section entirely, its all bolded and then any info added to existing sections is bolded within them! If you have any suggestions for anything else you would expect to see in the article definitely let me know! I am starting to get stumped with the vastness of my topic! Happy reading! :)