User:Seabuckthorn/sandbox1
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1: Well-written
- a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
- b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
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2: Verifiable with no original research
- a. Has an appropriate reference section:
Yes
- b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
excellent (Thorough check on Google.)
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- c. No original research:
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4: Neutral
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5: Stable: No edit wars, etc: Yes
6: Images Done (PD)
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6: Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
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I'm glad to see your work here. As per the above checklist, I do have some insights that I think will be useful in improving the article:
- I think the sentence "Pronovost worked for the NHL Central Scouting Bureau for five years until 1990, when he was hired as a scout for the New Jersey Devils, with whom he has been a member of three Stanley Cup championships, most recently in 2003." can be broken into simpler sentences to make it easier to follow.
- I think the sentence "The 53-year span between his first championship and the most recent is a Stanley Cup record." can be more clear.
Besides that, I think the article looks excellent. Resolute, please feel free to strike out any recommendation you think will not help in improving the article. All the best,