To-do list for Cataphract: edit · history · watch · refresh · Updated 2012-06-22
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Here are some tasks awaiting attention:
- Other : * Make sure all information sourced from the general references within the text has appropriate in-line citations. Much of the article is still composed of original work (albeit based upon the general references) or thinly-veiled plagiarism from various internet articles.
- Expand upon the "Cataphracts in East Asia" section with verifiable sources.
- Include where possible, higher-quality and more detailed images of cataphracts, historical depictions of cataphracts, recreations of cataphracts, drawings (art or otherwise) and so forth.
- Re-do "Tactics and Deployment" section to focus more strictly on attributable cataphract strategies employed by their users in antiquity and not simply general tidbits of cataphract history.
- The inclusion of a section detailing anti-cataphract tactics and how they were countered in antiquity would be appropriate, provided it's relatively brief (in comparison to the Tactics & Deployment section) and well sourced.
- "Related Cavalry" section requires more relevant and less ambiguous information; the inclusion of how cataphracts specifically inspired or influenced the development of the Knighthood in Europe and paved the way for the era of Feudalism would be appreciated.
- Double-check that all Greek, Latin and Persian language references and etymological data (including spelling and translation) are accurate. (As not much of it is referenced specifically)
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