I've reverted these changes for several reasons. Firstly, they are poorly written: "According to the 2011 census the population of Wales is...." - no, it was, almost three years ago. "Populace"....."reside"....."Historiclly", etc. Verbosity and poor spelling should be discouraged in articles. More importantly, in Matt's version there was an over-emphasis on, and over-detailed interpretation of, the census statistics on national identity, which seem to be written up in a WP:POINTy manner. Some referenced information seems to have been removed. The previous text was better balanced, and better written, so I have reverted to it - and subsequently tweaked it a little for better flow. Ghmyrtle (talk) 11:51, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- NO REFERENCES WERE REMOVED BY ME. I removed the POINTY-ness! That's what my edit was about. You could have changed spelling error and the odd word. But you just full-revert. Matt Lewis (talk) 15:37, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- If you didn't remove references, I apologise. Sometimes the "compare" function makes it very difficult to see what changes have actually been made. Ghmyrtle (talk) 16:09, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
Dealing with Original Research in the demographics section (the section was also very jumbled)
I don't have much time right now... but made an edit this morning which took me a lot of time last night and this morning too. It improves the oft-jumbled text of the Demographics section, and CLEARS UP ONE VITALLY IMPORTANT AREA OF ORIGINAL RESEARCH AND MISINFORMATION.
The text gave someone's own personal reading of a Census data sheet: I've simply shown the data as percentages: not interpreted and judged on it. The incorrect and 'OR' reading is/was said "34.1 per cent had no Welsh identity. 16.9 per cent considered themselves wholly British and another 9.4 per cent considered themselves as partly British. 73.7 per cent had no British identity." (my underline)
80 percent of people in Wales ticked only one box - mostly ticked Welsh, as they asked to after 2001. That does not mean they are not British. There nationality (the census question) is chosen here as Welsh. That's how it works in the UK. People can choose to say one or the other in the UK (that was the whole point of people wanting it in - I did myself after 2001, not becaise I'm not British!), it doesn not mean they are not the other - ie British nor Welsh! Many (I think most) people in England and Wales think that Welsh, Engilsh etc just IS British by default: that's the legal idea too. The qestion asked "How would you describe your nationality". Everyone knows most people just say their 'sub-nat', not their 'super-nat'. It's just the way it is. Britishness can even be seen as beyond-national anyway. It can also be seen as a simple legal default people accept. The do not have to be mutually exclusive.
We just cannot make these sweeping interpretations. As a side, we actually know that the whole census was actually regarded as confusing by over 50% of people. We also cannot say that 34.1 percent are NOT Welsh. It's pure Original Research. The Welsh gov summaries allude to what people put, not what they ARE. I added information the following 'ethnic group?' question on the census as it expanded (and shed light on) on the very same theme.
All we need offer people is the information. We don't have to tell them what to think. YES !
I put this alternative in instead (which adds relevant missing information, like the first line, and various data.)
(https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wales&diff=next&oldid=596754513#Demographics)
- The census of 2001 was criticised by many in Wales for not offering 'Welsh' as an option to describe their national identity.[1] Partly to address this concern the 2011 census offered a list of choices. It asked the question "How would you describe your national identity?" and underneath was a direction to "tick all that apply". 80% of the participants in Wales ticked one box, with 57.5 percent ticking 'Welsh' (65.9 percent in some combination), 11.2 percent ticking 'English' (13.8 percent in some combination), 0.5 percent ticking 'Scottish' (0.6 percent in some combination), 0.13 percent ticking 'Northern Irish' (0.15 percent in some combination), and 16.9 percent ticking 'British' (26 percent in some combination). 3.4 percent filled out 'Other', which included 0.4 instances that are the same as those above. The largest 'Other' was 'Irish', with 0.3 ticking 'Irish' (0.4 percent in some combination).[2]
- Identity was also the theme of the following question, which asked "What is your ethnic group?" The most-chosen option was 'White: Welsh/English/Scottish/Northern Irish/British' at 93.2 percent, a fall from 96 percent for the equivalent option of 'British' in 2001.[3] The next most-chosen option was 'Asian or Asian British' at 2.3 percent, followed by 'Mixed race' at 1 percent, 'Black or Black British' at 0.6 percent, and 'Irish' and 'Other' 0.5 percent each. The figure given for 'Total Black and minority ethnic' people was 4.4 percent, a significant rise from 2.1 percent in 2001.[4]
I Have to quickly go out quickly now, I do apologise. But Please read my work (it's always considered). Thanks. Matt Lewis (talk) 15:18, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- We really shouldn't be interpreting the raw census results ourselves at all - we should be relying on secondary sources. This is one such source - maybe not the best, but it covers the point. And we certainly should not be overstating the case made on one side or the other. I'd support removing the entire existing paragraph on national identity, and replacing it, thus:
- Existing paragraph:
The 2011 census showed that 57.5% of Wales' population considered their national identity as wholly Welsh and another 8.3% considered themselves to be partly Welsh (Welsh and British were the most common combination). 34.1% had no Welsh identity. 16.9% considered themselves wholly British and another 9.4% considered themselves as partly British. 73.7% had no British identity. 11.2% considered themselves wholly English and another 2.6% considered themselves partly English.[2]
- My suggestion:
The 2011 census showed that 65.9% of Wales' population described their national identity as Welsh; 26.3% described it as British; 13.8% described it as English; and 4.3 described it as "other". The percentages total more than 100% because some residents declared more than one national identity.[5]
- Ghmyrtle (talk) 15:44, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- I'm glad you agree we shouldn't be interpreting the data at all, but for me it's got to be worth giving the actual question, and why not each statistic too? I actually fully-expected to find the section done that way. It's all useful stuff isn't it? We also absolutely need the ethnicity question, as it expands on the identity question. It's the best raw data (and reference, frankly) that there is: a census.
- I'd love to give my interpretation underneath it all(!), but I did only give a lot of facts. I know you find what I wrote somehow 'pointy' (was it the order of things?), but I really do try and be aware of that kind of thing. What do you think is actually pointy about it? Maybe we could address that in turn.
- Off the record, I think you can actually take something positive from my text whichever 'side' of the emotional dispute you are on: ie whether you'd rather see I'm-nothing-but-Welsh, or I'm-just-British or I'm British-too! If only you knew the hours I've spent here over the years - in my numerous article edits at least - to try and compromise with the emotional positions of others: and specifically not to make anything I write 'pointy'! I always want things to be balanced, objective and well-made. If there is anything 'directional' about it, it's just to convey meaning, and perhaps help other people from making the kind of interpretive mistakes that the writer of the dodgy text I highlighted above made. ie - give full-informative text that can stand the test of time.
- Re the sources, I'd agree the one you've found is not ideal. I must have spent an hour at least on that side last night. I think it just happens to be difficult in this particular area. A surprise perhaps, but that seems to be true. Good sources must be out there, but I think that sometimes people here do expect them to be close at hand - ie we take the internet for granted sometimes. In the absence of them - and we'd need a few interpretations to write 'balance' that/this sentences - I think it's even more useful just to give all the raw data, as I have done. And in a way that hopefully no one sees as 'pointy' obviously.
- By the way, I've thought the Wales article has been imperfectly-written in parts for more like 10 years, let alone 3! A lot of Wikipedia is still like that. If the offending parts here have indeed existed unchanged for 3 years, then for 3 years the article has been promulgating some highly-contentious and decidedly non-policy 'Original Research', albeit rather hidden-away in the demographics section. Perhaps it's no wonder that one or two non-Welsh (or non-Welsh residing) Wikipedians appear a bit confused about these issues. Matt Lewis (talk) 18:32, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
I don't favour providing percentage figures that don't add up to 100% (excluding rounding), when they could and should. It leads to confusion. Anyway, we don't have to interpret the raw data. ONS have done that for us in this table: see KS202EW Percentages, Row 441 (Wales). That 34.1% of people living in Wales have no Welsh identity (column M), and 73.7% have no British identity (column X) is notable, accurate and informative, and can be cited. Daicaregos (talk) 18:43, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- I admit that source is very pungent (far too much so from my point of view) but if you read the exact wording Dai, you'll see that they are referring to what people put, not what they are. I'm planning to ring them about it tomorrow (I want to see it made clearer), and I'll forecast right now that the reason I've just given is exactly what they'll say to cover themselves. From their point of view, the Welsh Government always had problems with the initial 1998 democratic mandate only being 25% of the total electorate (ie it was passed by 50% or a 50% turnout). In the mini referendum of 2011 even less people voted, so they immediately used this census to effectively bolster what democratic mandate they had - basically by stressing how Welsh everyone felt. In a way, one can hardly blame them. It's just politics essentially, but you have to really look at the wording. Like a lawyer might perhaps. Matt Lewis (talk) 21:03, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- It is not the case that the figures "should" add up to 100% - in statistical terms it is perfectly reputable to note that, in cases where one more than option can be chosen, the figures will total more than 100%. My objection to spelling out all the permutations in detail is simply that it is unnecessary, and potentially confusing to itemise them all. We should keep it simple. It may at first glance seem noteworthy, for example, that 73.7% have no British identity - but is it, really, when the figure for the North East of England is 74.3%, for Merseyside 75.6%, and for England as a whole 70.7%? If the Wales figures are included, they should be compared with the figures for England, at least. But, if secondary sources which comment on the figures can't be found, it raises the question of how noteworthy they actually are. Rather than expanding the paragraph, I think a case can be made for removing it entirely - but, I would prefer simply to shorten it as I've suggested. Ghmyrtle (talk) 19:40, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- I think that listing all the stats as I've done - with the combined votes in brackets, actually shows what you alluded to above regarding England, and the all other evidence regarding UK Britishness: ie that an impossibly-to-know number of people clearly found it sufficient to just tick one box. You look at the 'Northern Irish' stat especially (were most people would expect at least half to say 'British'), as you think: hmm, all these people are following the same pattern: maybe I shouldn't draw too many obvious conclusions? Basically, if we list all the stats, the reader can make up their own mind. I hope that doesn't sound too pointy: I just think by giving it all, people can then read what in it whatever they choose too. Beginning that 80% of people ticked one box is really useful in this regard. We are here to help people attain a balanced understanding of things after all. As there clearly exists a very large figure for people saying they are "Welsh": the 'national pride element' is self-explanatory and automatically covered I think. Most people in Wales clearly identify as being Welsh!
- This discussion may be about the tension between 'pointiness' and the kind of elucidation that is necessary for balance and meaning. I've certainly found no way of shortening it all though: condensing this data seems to just retain the various problems over representation to me, so I favour the list. Matt Lewis (talk) 21:35, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- "73.7 per cent had no British identity" sounds a very bold statement. Maybe the census figures just prove that some people like to tick more boxes than others. But then I'm always very cynical. Martinevans123 (talk)
- Why? It only cost half a billion pounds, and only a little over 50% of people found it confusing in some way. Bargain.
- (I think we all in Wales owe a lot to the 'Welsh not' by the way. Teachers of the time found that bilingual classroom were impossible to effectively teach and learn in, just as any teacher would today. It's often said to be a wicked 'English act', but essentially these British/Welsh people of the day (most of them Welsh, being in Wales) did it for our future. The teachers were largely Welsh, but naturally recognised the need for English language learning. It's just a shame that the Welsh language died-back so much out of school, at least in the more-populated south of the country. But that's life, and all reports show they just can't turn that around however much they now try - and they are spending a small fortune pursuing it in my view. I'm just-about old enough to remember the remnants of corporal punishment myself - that side of it pretty unpleasant I admit, but that was how they achieved those kind of disciplinary things in those days alas). English has given us the world, and we can't boast about most of our 'heroes' without it, that's for sure. Matt Lewis (talk) 21:03, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- This is an example of where we need to be very careful with words, to avoid the possibility of misleading readers. The census doesn't show that 73.7% "had no British identity". It shows the proportion of the total who did not tick the "British" box under the question on "National identity". That is, it shows the percentage who did not indicate a British identity, rather than the proportion who had no British identity. Ghmyrtle (talk) 20:16, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- "It's worse that that, he's dead, Jim." Martinevans123 (talk) 20:31, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- That is exactly my point. It's the same with the line that says "34.1% had no Welsh identity". Can we really say that about people who just put 'British'? As I remember writing in a pretty well-received UK-naming guideline about 7 years ago, UK identity has always been far too complicated to draw simple conclusions about anyone. Matt Lewis (talk) 21:03, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- Matt, I remember your UK-naming guideline with unremitting fondness. But I refuse to fill in that damned census until they print it in Jedi. Martinevans123 (talk) 21:21, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- Well I doubt only 29.3% of English people support Murry. The question asked 'How would you describe your national identity?'. I would think many Brits would identify as 'British' likewise to 'European', or 'Welsh' likewise to 'Cardiffian', but not see that as there national identity. Sources use the phrase 'national identity' interchangeably with 'identity' which is misleading. I think stating '73.7% did not describe there national identity as British' or similar is clear. Rob (talk | contribs) 23:51, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
- But technically saying you are Welsh is actually saying you are British isn't it? Most of the time I certainly don't see them as any different. I live in the modern world, not the iron age. I don't think you can extract any 'British only' identity out of this data at all. It's just a flaw within the question. I think that the people filling it in were just trying to be useful as much as anything. What use is it just providing British? Or even doing both? It's the mindset of someone filling a census (already slightly befuddled as people do hate forms don't they - apart from Wikipidians of course!). Welsh, English etc - these are enough to place and satisfy people, and it's what we are. It's like the thing was unintentionally playing with people's heads. Looking around for good sources I've seen some really unpleasant right wing websites making hay with these statistics ("we are English and X people aren't!!"): but it's just flawed data. As I've already said, I actually complained to the guy who picked it up (he had to come back twice for me and was just a touch nervous the second time as legally I had to do it), and over another couple of questions regarding mental illness too: it wasn't a great census it really wasn't.
- I think we are actually making the same mistakes the question-compilers made: trying to oversimplify something that can't be this oversimplified. With a little more attention to detail: ie not treating people as idiots, it can be done. Oversimplification to the point of atrophy is a classic form maker's fault. Sorry I'm full of anecdotes, but I was asked to fill in something called a 'carer's assessment form' not that long ago, and the very first question on it was (almost exactly something like) "do you consider yourself to be Welsh?". I found it so impossible to imagine what they could do with any actual answer I could supply that I genuinely refused to fill in the whole form (and they accepted that too, hopefully out of embarrassment). I didn't think of saying this to them at the time, but couldn't they get that from the census? I just don't get it: as I said to them too - a lot of this 'identity building' stuff does creep me out. You're lucky it's not the place for more stories I tell you.
- The 2011 census was so obviously flawed in this area I think it's crazy trying to re-phrase any of it at all. We don't need to. Just give the data in percentages and in the most readable way possible. Some of it is fairly useful data: but only as raw data, not in an attempted summary. I hope this doesn't become a giant debate because I don't really understand what the problem is. It's always seems to be a colossal effort to improve anything on the main Welsh articles. I really don't feel comfortable with the current misinformation still up: I know it's been there a long time, but I don't think it's healthy and it's pure 'OR'. Keeping the version that is clearly incorrect makes no sense to me at all: my effort wasn't that bad was it? I basically just noticed a fault in the article, and did the 'work load' to correct what needed to be done. It's not my entry into an art competition. It just needs tinkering at best, a couple more refs maybe. Anyway I'll try and adjust and revise it per suggestions tomorrow. Matt Lewis (talk) 00:54, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- The danger is that you will be wasting your time. There is no consensus here yet as to the direction any changes to the text should take. Some want that paragraph expanded (for clarification), others want it minimised (to avoid mystification and undue weight). Frankly, if the statistics are to be expanded, it should be at an article like Britishness - where there is already a section on Scottish identity, and which this article could then link to - rather than this one. Ghmyrtle (talk) 08:58, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- These results are precisely the kind of statistics an encylopaedia should show in a country's demographics section. I take your point, however, that census respondents did not say they did not have any Welsh or British identity. I suggest: “34.1% stated no Welsh identity. 16.9% considered themselves wholly British and another 9.4% considered themselves as partly British. 73.7% stated no British identity.” Daicaregos (talk) 10:25, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- Replace 'identity' with 'national identity' and that wording is okay. I would only describe my national identity as British, but I still identify as English fairly often. I simply don't think the English are a nation. Rob (talk | contribs) 12:02, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- I still prefer my wording (up above at 15:44, 23 February 2014). Dai's suggestion still contains some interpretation of the statistics - using words like "considered themselves" rather than "stated that", which could be misleading
, and also in inferring a negative from the residual figures - like "34.1% stated no Welsh identity" when what the figures show is that 65.9% stated a Welsh national identity. I also still think, as I stated before, that some of the figures may be interpreted by readers as having more significance than they actually do, given the figures for other parts of the UK. I can see merit in putting a table in the Britishness article, linked from this article - which would provide some clarity. Ghmyrtle (talk) 12:22, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- Rob: A lot of people do though. Most people just don't think about it on this level: that's a central reason this data came out like it did I think.
- Dai: regarding "34.1% stated no Welsh identity", why not just say 'ticked Welsh' like I did, after I helpfully said what the question was, and gave supplied the raw data as percentages? I don't think we should attempt to summarise at all, simply because it's an impossible thing to do accurately here. The word 'stated' sounds like those people actually meant to convey they had no Welsh identity at all, but we know that can not be the case the tune of over a third of Wales. As I've said, if I myself just ticked 'British' it would naturally include 'Welsh', just as putting 'Welsh' would naturally include 'British'. Unfortunately I can't actually remember which route I took now (I can think of four possible ones, including writing something in 'other'), other than to point the question out to the returning collector, as I said. It was only a couple of years ago, and I think the fact that I can't remember actually say quite a lot. I think I'll ask around out of interest - see who else isn't sure now what they specifically put.
- Gh: Regarding "wasting time", that is 90% of Wikipedia in controversial areas, isn't it? And surely the Wales article is indented to cover all the sub-article information at least to some degree. If this misleading 'OR' is repeated in those articles too, it needs to be addressed and corrected. I can't accept the current content to just remain the same that's for sure. Wikipedia's 'consensus' rule just doesn't work in the specific topic discussion pages of these particular areas. People have been saying it for years: Too many socks, too may same old faces, too many jaded ignorers, and too many people saying they just won't go near: four reasons that effectively kill the consensus rule. But it doesn't mean that those present can't still come to an agreement. Anyway: to summarise this particular data will always be Original Research (ie WP:NOR in my opinion. Matt Lewis (talk) 13:40, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- That's not the point. The wording of the question was: 'How would you describe your national identity?'. Someone may identify as Cardiffian, Welsh, British and European, but only describe there national identity as 'British', 'Welsh' or both. From that question, you can't conclude that '34.1% stated no Welsh identity'.
- To be clear on my position, I don't really think it's too important what terms we use ('ticked', 'described' or 'stated'), but my preference is 'described' as that's what the question states.
- Rob (talk | contribs) 13:57, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- Did they answer the question though? They ticked a box, they didn't "describe" anything. It's too far removed. It's just not logical to transfer the wording to this degree. We need one of those 'logicians' here. Matt Lewis (talk) 14:19, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- I stick to what I said earlier. Rather than placing any interpretation on the census results ourselves, we should rely on what secondary sources say. This, I repeat, is a secondary source that summarises the information and appears to be as reliable as is necessary. We should use the text in that article (and any others that we can find) to present a summary here. Incidentally, I tried to prepare a summary table for the Britishness article, but have given up as the ONS tables are simply too complex to summarise effectively. Ghmyrtle (talk) 14:03, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- If we must use the raw sources, I suggest this:
"In the 2011 census, 57.5% of Wales' population stated their sole national identity to be Welsh, and a further 7.1% stated it as both Welsh and British. The proportion giving their sole national identity as British was 16.9%, with 11.2% giving their sole national identity as English."
Ghmyrtle (talk) 14:45, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- Either you haven't read a single word I've written or you are just winding me up. That is ALL interpretation to nth degree! You are being very close to the line with me right now. I'd strike that 7,000 from your watchlist at this minute and give this your full undivided attention if I were you. You can agree to this easily if you want, you just wont. You never, ever have with me. I think I just upset you at some point and that was it. Your premiss has always been that I'm biased, and it's always been the opposite. Can you imagine how it makes me feel? The belligerent on Wikpipedia hold 99% of its bleeding power. You should be wanting the article to enlighten and inform people: that should be a natural instinct for you, not appending your user page every 2 hours with your latest whatevers. Just give this some proper mental thought. Matt Lewis (talk) 15:30, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- This has nothing to do with you personally. I'm simply trying to come up with an improvement to the current wording, that summarises the census results without putting any slant whatsoever on them. So far I've made two specific proposals, either of which would in my view be an improvement on the current wording. Ghmyrtle (talk) 15:51, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- But the changes you have made in your suggestions are negligible. This is exactly what I've been predicting lately about bringing suggestions to these particular articles' discussion pages. Your suggests are so similar to what we have they are both still totally slanted and entirely Original Research. Like the current text, they develop the context of sourced language where they shouldn't, and interpret when they have no right. Can't you see the inherent OR in interpreting this data? We actually have data we can simply present, and a complete mug (ie me) who has done all the donkey work in presenting it in a perfectly readable way. You immediately shat all over it completely, even (wrongly) suggesting I'd removed needed references. It was an utterly needless knee-jerk attack to a load of hard work, and you've followed it by completely digging your heels in. I did all that work for the one element of this encyclopedia that hardly anyone cares about: the reader. Whatever Wikipedia's confused policy might say about accuracy, the reader simply desires it, and as a direct consequence of that the reader becomes devalued by default. Think about it - it's true. Perfect or not, for writing what I did I should have been congratulated, not pissed on. Just try and imagine reading it if an editor you really respected had written it. I think you'd be sending him a cake. Matt Lewis (talk) 18:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- I didn't "piss on" your suggestion - I reverted it because in my view it was worse than the previous wording, and then another editor agreed with me. It was verbose, gave the whole issue undue weight (you surely cannot deny that it has become your pet hobbyhorse - and that of no-one else here), and parts of it were utterly incomprehensible to me and, I'm pretty sure, most readers. My intention is to remove any interpretation of the figures, not to add one. If it helps (I don't hold out much hope, but anyway...) I'd be happy to add to the front of my suggestion a slightly reworded version of your explanation, as follows:
"The 2001 UK census was criticised in Wales for not offering 'Welsh' as an option to describe respondents' national identity.[1] Partly to address this concern, the 2011 census asked the question "How would you describe your national identity?", with a list of options that included Welsh; respondents could check more than one option. The outcome was that 57.5% of Wales' population stated their sole national identity to be Welsh, and a further 7.1% stated it as both Welsh and British. The proportion giving their sole national identity as British was 16.9%, with 11.2% giving their sole national identity as English."
Ghmyrtle (talk) 19:13, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- You didn't piss on my 'suggestion' (as you put it)?!! At the top of this section is where you pissed on my article edit, and it was a steamer. It was full of falsehoods and 100% designed to make everything I wrote look like total shit. And you outrageously claimed that what already existed was much better, but I don't think you've even bothered to look properly even now. What was there was a bloody mess, and it's only slightly better since some of the usual post attempted-edit tinkering (made as much as anything to save some embarrassment). It was/still-is full of 2001 data and was not coherent: my reorganisation and additions simply made it make sense for readers. And you initially accepted that there was WP:OR, though all you've suggested since is almost identical OR!
- You just cynically removed a whole bunch of improvements. You wouldn't get away with that anywhere other than these second-tier UK/NATIONAL articles. The ridiculous rope around them has protected you for years. If you and a few other nationlists were area-banned for a year (gold heart, HK, RA - that would do it), UK articles would blossom into amongst the best on Wikipedia, if not the best. The whole miserable pallor around them would lift, and people would come in and do all kinds of good work. Britain is small enough and dedicated enough to make them superb. But this wholly-unrepresentational dislike of the UK itself has made them amongst the worst.
- There was nothing positive about what you wrote about my edit at all: it was totally knee-jerk and deliberately-unpleasant horseshit, and you've repeated the same provocative bollocks about it above even now. I find it arrogant and offensive. I have never ever shat on other people's copy. Not once. I've always been proud of my own copy edits, and I've been complimented on them a number of times in the past. I don't spend the hours making them totally word-by-word perfect, as this is meant to be a joint effort (if some people would only allow it to be): I spend the time making them readable, fair and accurate: and most of all trying to consider the local positional brick-wallers like you. Whatever I compose with you in the neighbourhood is a painstaking attempt to work around your entrenched nationalist politics and unbending edit-protectional stance.
- But hey, at least your edit-note this time was a different approach to your usual provocative "removing POV"! It was lovely to see you actually take up my suggestion of saying "take it to talk" instead (hmmm). And now you suggest I am biased yet again, and all-alone alas too. Who was this 'other person' who you say agreed with your assessment? Rob?! Your 'revised' suggestion above, as you fully know, is simply patronising: you've simply included the question this time, and carried on with almost exactly the same entirely unhelpful, utterly needless, fully illogical and 'OR' interpretation. Matt Lewis (talk) 21:28, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- Well, I was just trying to help. But I don't see much point in continuing with this. If you find anyone to agree with your position, I'll rejoin the discussion. Ghmyrtle (talk) 21:42, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- No, because there's nowhere else to go right now is there? As predicted, you've offered 4 barely-differing versions of the existing non-policy text. It's such a waste of my time, but I'll see what I can do. Matt Lewis (talk) 21:58, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- I've started a new thread down below. Hopefully it will encourage other editors to express a view. Ghmyrtle (talk) 22:13, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- Ghmyrtle not out to get you... he's just vigilant. Rob (talk | contribs) 16:57, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- No because there's nowhere else to go right now is there. It's entrenched, and over nothing but an obvious improvement. Matt Lewis (talk) 21:58, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- I find the style passive aggressive and always have. I think think with the right will we can all sort this out easily. Matt Lewis (talk) 18:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- I'd rather think of myself as calm and considered - or perhaps as the lukewarm water of WP. Ghmyrtle (talk) 19:15, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- Small's the word. You've got your "sole" but you've got no soul. Matt Lewis (talk) 21:28, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- I haven't 'interpreted' anything: I avoided OR other than to point out he "80%" ticked one box. That's acceptable in my opinion, as it aids understanding. You've basically found a single source (from a website that promotes 'stateless nations') which happens to agree with Wikipedia's current 'OR'. Basically you are saying that using the source stops it being 'OR'! (I know you are stuck for sources, so was I ). But all my arguments remain, and there are simply too few sources available. This is 'source searching' area in which Wikipedia itself can get very dodgy in my opinion - I do hope we can avoid the "not about truth" territory. There is not better solution than to just provide the census data, framing it fairly in a balanced way. Matt Lewis (talk) 14:19, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- I prefer Ghmyrtle suggestion. I don't think we should present raw data for readers to try to interpret, and I don't agree with your 'ticked box' not 'described' logic. If you tick a box that indicates you describe your national identity as X, then you are describing your national identity as that. By your logic, we shouldn't provide interpretations of any of the census data, which is absurd. Rob (talk | contribs) 14:38, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- The question wasn't as simple as ticking a single box was it! Ghmyrtle uses words like "sole": nobody on the census has used it, and it doesn't logically stack up either. It's 'developing' something too. Thinking of that the ridiculous 'warning' you gave me on my talk page, I'm wondering now you just don't want a suggestion of mine making it to the article frankly. You've just simply ignored all my arguments. I vowed to myself once that I wouldn't be part of something like this again. Put it this way: what is worse about my suggestion? What we currently have clearly HAS to be changed. I have never ever in my all Wikipedia days argued against something like this, even if I did prefer the original. What is the point? Part of consensus is being able to listen and adapt, even if you do really think it's little of an improvement. But this is just pure entrenchment if you ask me. Don't you have anything else to do but dig your heals on a clearly useful change to Wikipedia? I've added to the encyclopedia. I've made it better. It's as clear as a ringing bell that's what I did (before you needlessly reverted and warned me). If you genuinely can't see that then you are just a hindrance here imo. Matt Lewis (talk) 15:30, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
Matt, I doubt anybody's going to support wording that is confusing, and repeats to the reader how a multiple choice census question is answered. It's illogical.
And also, it's unionist like yourself make us all look like dickheads.
Regards, Rob (talk | contribs) 22:17, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
- Unionist? Don't be such a damn fool. I am what I am - someone who exists. How many nationally-contented people outside of Wikipedia get referred to as "unionists" for God's sake? The UK is simply here - nobody has to apologise for it. If you see some wording that you find confusing, just change it. That's what you are here for isn't it? Don't throw the enitre baby out with the bathwater. It was a depressingly pointless warn/revert that you made of my edit it really was.
- And that's a complete misuse of the word "logic": I added illumination: people forget what this encyclopedia is supposed to be about. Readers. And readers are not gaping fools. The question is important here, as are the results. What ithere is actually illogical as things currently stand (on a number of levels) - what I did was bring in logic. Matt Lewis (talk) 22:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
National identity section
Matt's national identity paragraph intro, relating to the 2001 census problems, is interesting and notable, and should be included if a RS citation can be found. Having considered editor comments above (in particular, using described and stated in place of considered, and adding national before identity), I suggest this:
- The 2011 census showed that 57.5% of Wales' population described their national identity as wholly Welsh and another 8.3% as partly Welsh (Welsh and British were the most common combination). 34.1% stated no Welsh national identity. 16.9% described it as wholly British and another 9.4% as partly British. 73.7% stated no British national identity. 11.2% described their national identity as wholly English and another 2.6% as partly English.
Any further suggestions? Daicaregos (talk) 09:21, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
- My latest suggestion is down below, where I'd hoped we could concentrate discussion. My comment on your suggestion is simply that it goes into unnecessary detail and is over-complicated. I also think the terminology could be more precise. They didn't "describe" their national identity as "wholly Welsh", for example - they simply ticked the Welsh box and no other, which in my view could be better described as "stated their sole national identity to be Welsh". Ghmyrtle (talk) 09:38, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
- So it is. Sorry. I'd read some of that section and it didn't seem to have anything to do with this topic. These threads seem to become rather messy. May I ask editors not to alter their posts (other than for minor corrections, to spelling etc.) and to post them chronologically. At the very least, it requires them to be re-read. Daicaregos (talk) 09:48, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
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Wales is not a state!
88.145.35.122 (talk) 19:50, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
- That is true. The article does not claim that it is. But it is a country. Ghmyrtle (talk) 19:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
- It's not a Principality either, just for the record . Martinevans123 (talk) 21:37, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
Trying to resolve the discussion above - views are welcome...
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