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The track of the storm tracked the typhoon was Category 3 typhoon, why the articles tracked it reached Cat 4 as the last forecast (JTWC) on Oct 4, 2015? 14.167.133.68 (talk) 12:27, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
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Typhoon Mujigae, known in the Philippines as Tropical Storm Kabayan, was the strongest typhoon to strike the province of Guangdong in the month of October and the costliest typhoon to impact China in 2015.This sentence seems a bit long. maybe remove the part about Guangdong, since that record seems really specific. Optionally, unlink China; see MOS:OL.
The typhoon caused widespread damage in the Chinese provinces of Guangdong, Guangxi, and Hainan from October 3 to 6, 2015; earlier in its existence it impacted the Philippines as a developing tropical cyclone, and later on it brought heavy rain to Thailandand Vietnam.This just seems a bit disorganized; I would change it to
As a developing tropical cyclone, Mujigae impacted the Philippines, before going on to make landfall in China, causing severe damage in the provinces of Guangdong, Guangxi, and Hainan when it made landfall between October 3 and October 6. Vietnam and Thailand also experienced heavy rainfall from the storm as it weakened over China.
before emerging into the South China Sea the next morning."before emerging into" seems a bit vague; I'm not sure how to describe it. I would use
before crossing intoinstead.
Mujigae strengthened quickly and then rapidly over the next two days, becoming a mature typhoon with 10-minute sustained winds of 155 km/h (100 mph)Okay. A few things: "quickly and then rapidly" a bit redundant. Just say
Mujigae underwent a period of rapid intensification over the next two days. "mature" is also an odd adjective to describe a typhoon, you can use something like strong or powerful:
becoming a strong/powerful typhoon with 10-minute sustained winds of 155 km/h (100 mph)would sound better.
weakened swiftlyI may just be nitpicking, but "quickly" would fit better here.
Mujigae's most severe impacts occurred in China, where the provinces of Guangdong, Guangxi, and Hainan were the worst hit.I would say
...most severe impacts occured in China, with the provinces of Guangdong, Guangxi, and Hainan being the worst hit.
resulting in widespread power outages and disruptions to telecommunications and water supplies.Stick to past tense; use "which resulted" instead.
besides killing seven and leaving 223 injuredThis wording is also odd. maybe use 'also' instead of 'besides', since besides makes them look like two separate events.
These had the effect of disrupting tourism amid China's "Golden Week" holidays in lieu of their National Day.This seems like passive voice, though I may be wrong; rewrite as
The storm disrupted travel during China's "Golden Week" holiday in celebration of their National Day., make sure to link Golden Week.
In other parts of China, Hong Kong and Macau experienced gusty winds and heavy rain from October 3 to 5 as Mujigae passed to the south, but were left relatively unscathed.Needs a rewrite:
Hong Kong and Macau also experienced gusty winds and heavy rain as Mujigae made landfall from the south. Despite this, the regions experienced minimal damage.
Towards the end of Mujigae's lifespan, the outer circulation of Mujigae brought heavy rains to parts of Vietnam and Thailand. Localized flash floods resulted, damaging homes and crops.Change "the outer circulation of Mujigae" to "its outer circulation", and change "...Thailand. Localized flash floods resulted" to "...Thailand, which resulted in localized flash floods".
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