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Please find below, some additions and changes that I have proposed.
1. Request to review "update/addition" for the section, "Lobbying".
1a. Representatives of Southwestern Advantage testified in support of Michigan House Bill 5726 – an act to prohibit a person from promoting or participating in a pyramid promotion scheme.[1]
Reply 13-APR-2019
Clarification requested
Please provide the text of the testimony. Furthermore, the claim that this prohibits a person from promoting or participating in a pyramid promotion scheme does not clarify what the bill defines as this type of practice. "Pyramid promotional scheme" would be defined by the bill as any plan or operation in which an individual gives consideration for the opportunity to receive compensation that is derived primary [sic] from recruiting other individuals into the plan or operation rather than from the sale or consumption of products and services by ultimate users. The latter operations may still be considered differently in states where this bill does not go into effect. Mentioning it as a "prohibiting pyramid schemes" bill does not clarify this difference.
Spintendo 01:47, 14 April 2019 (UTC)
1b. The bill was approved by the governor and filed with Secretary of State on August 15, 2018.[2]
Reply 13-APR-2019
Clarification requested
A page number was not provided.
Spintendo 01:42, 14 April 2019 (UTC)
2. Request to review "update/addition" for the section, "Bans From Campuses".
Southwestern Advantage participants have represented over 1,600 campuses campuses worldwide; over 200 campuses were represented in 2018.[3]
Reply 13-APR-2019
Clarification requested
Please provide an independent source for this claim.
Spintendo 01:42, 14 April 2019 (UTC)
3. Request to review proposed section named "Awards"
3a. Southwestern Advantage and its Global Director of Campus Relations, Dr. Ralph Brigham, were selected as recipients of the 2019 Charles F. Kettering Award.[4]
3b. Nashville's Top Workplaces 2016.[5]
3c. Better Business Bureau Torch Award for Ethical Commerce 2015.[6]
3d. BBB Torch Awards recognize ethical business practices and marketplace trust.[7]
3e. Nashville's Top Workplaces 2015.[8]
3f. Nashville's Top Workplaces 2014. [9]
3g. Nashville Business Journal Best In Business Award 2013.[10]
Reply 13-APR-2019
Not done
Not independently notable in Wikipedia. If these are, please provide the WL's for each award.
Spintendo 01:42, 14 April 2019 (UTC)
4. Request to review the the sentence is it is relevant to the subject, ""According to the anti-human trafficking charity Polaris, organizations often send their recruiters to target unemployed young people and college students with promises of high profits"
Reason: The cited article is about the Travelling Sales Industry and not related with Southwestern Advantage.
Please feel free to ask if you have any questions or concerns, i would be glad to answer them.
Reply 13-APR-2019
Clarification requested
A travelling sales industry would conceivably include one where individuals are chosen to sell magazines and other products door-to-door throughout the United States. This outwardly appears to describe a business similar to the one the subject organization conducts.
Spintendo 01:42, 14 April 2019 (UTC)
Saad Ahmed2983 (talk) 14:09, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
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(help)I am removing the following edits from this page via reversion - other IPs have removed edits from User:Log.Base multiple times for false information, misleading use of sources, and misappropriating non-notable information (Disclaimer: I do NOT work for SA, I am a retail employee for Apple). Here is what I will be removing and why, in case this editor continues spamming:
If editor attempts to add information again, I will formally report upon reversion. Thank you. MG572W (talk) 15:57, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
other IPs have removed edits from User:Log.Base multiple times for false information, misleading use of sources, and misappropriating non-notable information
Most municipalities have laws regarding permits for door-to-door sales, and part of those laws include normal posting of the acceptance of permits online. This is not in order to alert citizens after complaints.
the article cited literally says this was a hoax. This violates numerous Wikipedia policies.
This edit is designed to spin up unfounded paranoia.
This has absolutely nothing to do with the subject of this Wikipedia page, and the article itself says this is based on speculation only.
"Yeah the dude came our door too," said Sam Jones. "We have a 'No Soliciting' sign that was clearly ignored. I chalked that up to cultural differences...I do have an acquaintance that bought books from one of these guys. It's legit but that doesn't make it any less annoying."
Despite the claims, the Chula Vista Police Department noted that although there was no increase in formal complaints about the employees.
The title of the citation is "Online Claims of Human Traffickers Going Door to Door in Ba Unfounded". Again, irrelevant spamming of false information.
I have plenty of concerns - you are misleadingly quoting articles from 2013, 2017, and 2019, regarding single salesman, in articles that are both not notable, and are overwhelmingly based on unfounded rumors or complaints (and complaining about one salesperson in an employee pool of literally thousands - that makes no sense). Also, one of these articles was regarding a salesman who was an immigrant, to which the neighborhood response screams of racism.
Every salesperson for every company in America could be considered "aggressive" - quoting singular stories about unfounded rumors or situations that clearly do not meet WP:NOTABLE regarding single salesman is not this Wikipedia page is for (though it clearly has other issues with neutrality, like mentioning the Fair Labor Standards Act, even though those laws and regulations do not apply to independent contractors). Is there a section on the Subaru page about how pushy their car salesman are? Of course not.
Furthermore, company pages are not a place to air out personal vendettas about legal selling tactics - none of the articles you cited mentioned anything about anyone being arrested, accused, charged (and "local concerns over human trafficking"? You cannot be serious) - or even operating without the proper permits. Content does not belong on page, for these reasons - along with the reasons previously stated. MG572W (talk) 13:05, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
none of the articles you cited mentioned anything about anyone being arrested, accused, charged (and "local concerns over human trafficking"? You cannot be serious)
company pages are not a place to air out personal vendettas about legal selling tactics
Also, one of these articles was regarding a salesman who was an immigrant, to which the neighborhood response screams of racism.
Interesting how your “variety of perspective” are all negative articles centered around the same subject! I’ve waited a month to see if you were really acting in good faith in “improving the article” - but strangely, you’ve simply reinstated your manipulative, biased edits… and done nothing else to the page! Your edits are sensationalist and biased, and your so-called interpretation of WP:N is patently false.
Forget the Subaru analogy, I’m not going to waste my time on how you’re wrong. Instead, please tell me how two people being arrested - out of the literal dozens of thousands of employees that have worked for the company - meets the newsworthy threshold of Wikipedia? If that were the case, Wiki would need to keep records quoting local news stories of every time someone was arrested while they were working for a major company. If there were 100 arrests in a short period of time, that’s notable: two arrests for people - who weren’t charged with any crime - from 2013 is a joke, and reeks of bias.
Next, a local school sending out an announcement about people legally selling door to door is not national news, and in no way, shape, or form passes WP:N, unless Wikipedia is for announcements from the PTA board.
Finally, the attempt to somehow connect Southwestern Advantage to child trafficking through (and I quote) “unfounded rumors” in 2013 is borderline slanderous. If the rumors are not true in any way, shape, or form, it is not worth mentioning on a Wikipedia page, period. The article is literally about a Facebook post - that’s the kind of threshold for reliable coverage Wikipedia is trying to have? I think not - an encyclopedia is not a home for what amounts to unfounded gossip.
The only thing worth mentioning from all the biased garbage you added is from this citation that the head of media relations noting that sometimes they receive complaints. There is a quote from 2017 in the news article cited that is useful… the rest of the information from this article is not relevant. Just read the headline and first sentence, which is blatantly trying to drum up dramatic responses (kind of like you!). The article even notes that the people mentioned “were not necessarily connected to other complaints, however”. I must ask - since when is Wikipedia a place for speculative maybes about things that hold no national relevance?
To recap: you have quoted four articles across 10+ years from completely different states, regarding less than ten employees for a company that employs thousands each year. Even under the false pretense of “addressing the page flag”, you’ve failed to do anything to improve this page. MG572W (talk) 19:08, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
Wiki would need to keep records quoting local news stories of every time someone was arrested while they were working for a major company.
Finally, the attempt to somehow connect Southwestern Advantage to child trafficking through (and I quote) “unfounded rumors” in 2013 is borderline slanderous. If the rumors are not true in any way, shape, or form, it is not worth mentioning on a Wikipedia page, period. The article is literally about a Facebook post - that’s the kind of threshold for reliable coverage Wikipedia is trying to have? I think not - an encyclopedia is not a home for what amounts to unfounded gossip.
I must ask - since when is Wikipedia a place for speculative maybes about things that hold no national relevance?
To recap: you have quoted four articles across 10+ years from completely different states, regarding less than ten employees for a company that employs thousands each year.
I have reverted your vandalism again, since you are solely focused on adding material irrelevant to the purpose of the page. You’ve now added the same slanderous information to additional sections, while still refusing to engage with the substance of the points I’ve made. Nothing you’ve said has justified your continued spamming; you are ignoring my core points to hide under the broad guise of what you think Wikipedia is. I believe your edits are biased, even if you try to justify it by “adding sources elsewhere” as a disguise.
You said, “Wikipedia just serves as a place to collect and record coverage by what the news reports.” This is factually incorrect! If Wikipedia were a record of everything reported by every local news station, every article would be nonsense sensationalism like your edits here.
I would also encourage you to read Wikipedia’s policies around this, which I have copy-pasted a quote from here. “Per policy, Wikipedia is not for scandal mongering or gossip. Even in respected media, a 24-hour news cycle and other pressures inherent in the journalism industry can lead to infotainment and churnalism without proper fact checking, and they may engage in frivolous "silly season" reporting. Some editors may take into account perceived media bias, such as Missing white woman syndrome, when assessing notability. Note that this guideline applies to articles about a wide range of subjects beyond just events including articles about living people, celebrities, and fringe ideas.”
I could care less about this weird, archaic sales company (I didn’t own a single textbook in college personally), but you are degrading Wikipedia’s core mission to be a neutral home of knowledge by manipulating these old gossip stories. Again, Wikipedia is not a platform to post unfounded Facebook rumors of child trafficking; the substance of your edits are slanted to strike up literal fear about their employees as potentially connected to stuff like pedophilia and robbery. If rumors are unfounded, what is the value of mentioning them at all??? If you can’t see how that is biased and extremely dangerous in a way that could have real-world consequences - not to mention in conflict with the goals of Wikipedia - then I can’t help you. This information does not “benefit” the page, except to fear monger.
I have rolled back the page to the version from Followcreeks on March 3rd, 2022, for the reasons listed above. MG572W (talk) 01:56, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
Hello I have noticed that many of my addition to the page have been reverted by @Grayfell without specific reasoning. I am posting here as the claim of the sources not being reliable and the wording being promotional is in conflict with other sourcing that is currently being allowed to remain on the page as well as others pages across Wikipedia. I have attached my reason below to not create an unnecessary argumentative environment. The sources listed below were claimed to be unreliable. Please explain how these are unreliable as they are independent news outlets.
https://www.herald-dispatch.com/nebraska-student-selling-educational-tools-in-wayne-county/article_d963e429-e7aa-55e3-8a31-a83fc9a8637f.html (local newspaper)
https://www.woodwardnews.net/community/the-bookman-visits-oklahoma-from-latvia/article_b5f29d02-fde4-11ec-9282-8360c7445e21.html (local newspaper)
https://www.lagrangenewsonline.com/articles/leading-texas-intern-worked-in-lagrange-county/?fbclid=IwAR2O24yeyaJqc41wVSEU9cq77AD1BsZThaquWqYWMa-HMAqTvLobI0SqtYY (local newspaper)
https://www.nashvillepost.com/business/people/veteran-southwestern-leader-to-retire/article_463d441c-39c1-11ed-b902-67300ba87aba.html How is the Nashville Post seen an unreliable, as it is a notable news outlet based in Nashville and meets Wikipedia:GNG?
An industry specific publication (such as Direct Selling News) being seen as "unreliable" appears to be a bias POV against direct sales pages, as industry specific new outlets are commonly allowed among other business pages; i.e. Eater, ESPN, Autosport, the economist, etc. These edits were an attempt to improve the page, as mentioned in the flag by @Hipal, there is far too much on the page that is from poor sourcing and needs to be revised. Tipaloo (talk) 17:38, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
I've reverted the subsequent edits after observing that at least two reliable sources were removed, Turner(2007) and Cunha(2015). --Hipal (talk) 23:49, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
This was removed . I've copied it here in case something can be salvaged from the content or the six references. --Hipal (talk) 16:59, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
In 2007, Southwestern Advantage lobbied against the Malinda's Traveling Sales Crew Protection Act,[1][2] an anti-traveling sales crew bill intended to stop companies from putting their workers in dangerous and unfair conditions.[3][4] The bill was passed, but in a form that applies only to sales workers who travel in groups of two or more.[5][6]
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Moore says Southwestern opposed the bill because it would require the company to jettison the independent-contractor system, a business model, he says, that nurtures the entrepreneurial spirit.
A dead teenager's father and a liberal advocacy group have accused a Wisconsin lawmaker of blocking a bill regulating door-to-door sales crews in exchange for campaign contributions. ... Campaign finance reports show Moulton, chairman of the Assembly Small Business Committee, recorded $1,000 in June from three executives of Southwestern Company, the only company registered against the measure.I have omitted some content for brevity, obviously. AP stories are often removed from online archives, but this doesn't make them any less reliable. 'Verifiability' doesn't mean 'convenient'.
Still, the publisher vigorously defends its turf. Earlier this year, it fought a bill introduced in the Wisconsin Senate that would have required it to pay its sales staff salaries. Possibly the broadest such measure yet introduced in a state legislature, the bill, authored by state Sen. Jon Erpenbach, now awaits action in the lower house. Moore says Southwestern opposed the bill because it would require the company to jettison the independent-contractor system, a business model, he says, that nurtures the entrepreneurial spirit.
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