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There are reverts going on around the line "It is common to encounter a claim that the Emancipation Proclamation did not immediately free a single slave." This probably does need some cites, but the mistaken belief that nobody was freed immediately is so pervasive that there is no reason to start by erasing it. (Even Cliff Notes gets it wrong: "Did Abraham Lincoln's Emancipation Proclamation actually free any slaves?") Tagging it for cites needed would have been the appropriate action. This might even benefit from some rewording depending on how cites are structured. Dispelling common myths would seem to be a proper role of an encyclopedia. Red Harvest (talk) 01:36, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
[Copied from User talk:Rjensen page - section "What are RS that use this language?"]
Please provide citations for embolden phrase In a single stroke. Claiming RS says so, then not provide RS is dubious work. Mitchumch (talk) 14:49, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
Hello, this article has a wrong date in the introduction.
On September 19, 2006, Lincoln had issued a preliminary proclamation warning that he would order the emancipation of all slaves in any state that did not end its rebellion against the Union by January 1, 1863
SInce I have never done this , I am sorry if this is not the way to do it... — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.187.23.250 (talk) 18:16, 4 November 2015 (UTC)
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Abraham Lincoln wrte it — Preceding unsigned comment added by 100.3.224.121 (talk) 20:55, 29 September 2016 (UTC)
Someone needs to ad this, it probably forced lincoln's hand.
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i dont think so
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I just noticed this intro matches very closely to the page on the Emancipation Proclamation in The American People: Creating a Nation and a Society by Nash. If it is plagiarized, it should probably be rewritten.
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Geekdiva: In your edit summary you said "all it caught"? What are you referring to and can you link it? Thanks. Alanscottwalker (talk) 13:18, 15 September 2017 (UTC)
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The first image in this article is an artists rendition of a fictional character reading the proclamation, below is an actual image of the original document. Should this be changed? It doesn't seem that image has any meaningful importance to the Emancipation Proclamation aside from being inspired by it. Certainly not enough to be the main image for the article. --Dabluecaboose (talk) 21:05, 24 July 2019 (UTC)
Please see: Talk:Forced into Glory § Balance: Conflict between Lincoln critics like Bennett, and critics of those critics.
The article (on a somewhat controversial biography of Abraham Lincoln) rarely has editors or even talk-page comments, so additional input is requested. PoV issues with our article have been pointed out since 2009, and the off-site academic controversy involving the book's notable author, Lerone Bennett Jr., and his views about Lincoln and the Emancipation Proclamation goes back to the 1960s. — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼 23:01, 12 November 2019 (UTC)
" It proclaimed the freedom of all slaves in the ten states in rebellion." Shouldn't that be 11 or since part of Virginia remained with the Union Virginia is not counted? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.59.95.185 (talk) 17:15, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
It proclaimed the freedom of all slaves in only eight states (Arkansas, Texas, Mississippi, Alabama, Florida, Georgia, South Carolina, North Carolina) in which all the slaves in the entire state were freed. As is mentioned later in the article and in the Proclamation itself, it proclaimed the freedom of the slaves in only some parts of Louisiana and Virginia, not all the slaves in those two states. Although the article does clarify this eventually, it needs to be corrected in the lede.47.139.47.77 (talk) 18:45, 14 March 2020 (UTC)
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Change "It proclaimed the freedom of all slaves in the ten states in rebellion" to either
(See my previous comment explaining why the current text in inaccurate. Choose any accurate text that sounds good and is not misleading. Keep in mind that there is more detail in the body of the article, so it isn't necessary to exhaustively cover the topic in the lede, but it does have to be factually correct, and "all ... in ten states" is not.)47.139.47.77 (talk) 18:50, 14 March 2020 (UTC)
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PLEASE copy and paste the code to reply(Talk) 20:08, 28 March 2020 (UTC)The second paragraph of this article starts with the line "With Congress' approval Lincoln in 1862, with partial compensation, ended slavery in the District of Columbia", with "slavery in the District of Columbia" being a red link. I believe the correct article it should be linking to is this article on the D.C. Compensated Emancipation Act. As the article is under semiprotection, I can not edit this page, and hence I am posting here.
FerrlockHolmes (talk) 12:08, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
Actually, nevermind, I just realized there already was a link linking to that very page in the same line. My bad!
FerrlockHolmes (talk) 12:09, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
The lead of this article is FAR too long. See Manual_of_Style Lead_section Length. It looks like the lead should be 3-4 short paragraphs rather than the 7 long paragraphs the article presently has. (And I've learned it is "lead" rather than "lede"; the latter is a different thing it seems, e.g., the lede of a newspaper article.) As I read the lead, I got confused as to whether I was in the article or the lead; the lead paragraphs presently read like article discussion. The task is to cut and condense text already in the article, or move text to the appropriate section of the article. A long lead makes the article too intimidating for readers. Bdushaw (talk) 08:59, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
For those looking to fix the overly long lead section: I noticed the 'coverage' section repeats a lot of things already mentioned in the lead. Someone should probably weed out all the repeated information. Omegastar (talk) 23:24, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Why is the Danish translation of “ The text of the Preliminary Emancipation Declaration,” near the top of the page? Bilgerat78 (talk) 04:09, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
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Making sure sources of information or even opinion are legitimate and appropriate can be crucial on articles especially those of historical importance. In the Critique section on the article of the Emancipation Proclamation an editor has put there that "Kal Ashraf wrote:" followed by a brief quote.I like everyone else who read this part asked who is Kal Ashraf and a google search returned zero results. After more research I finally found the article at hand through Jstor. The piece quoted is a half page editorial/news letter. Kal Ashraf and his work on the Emancipation Proclamation are not in anyway up to standards in reliability or importance necessary for the subject or for the ethical dissemination of fact and information that Wikipedia stands for. Kal Ashraf name and statement which are featured on the article need to be removed and replaced with a more substantial and legitimate scholar on the subject. Wikieditwiki201 (talk) 07:24, 22 October 2020 (UTC)
Footnote 11 is quoted as the EP is historic cuz it "would redefine the Civil War, turning it from a struggle to preserve the Union to one focused on ending slavery, and set a decisive course for how the nation would be reshaped after that historic conflict". This framing has two problems:
1. It doesn't mention that the source History.com article is referring to Lincoln's purpose in the Civil War.
My reply: The two sentences in the last paragraph of history.com are not clearly written. The second does not seem to follow from the first. The first is about Lincoln's purpose, but the second does not seem to be.
2. It obfuscates that the Union broke in the first place because the South was worried slavery was going to be curtailed, and some readers will assume the original break did not concern slavery because this Lost Cause alternative history is a common narrative even today.
My reply: It does not obfuscate that. Rather, it does not discuss why the South seceded; it is solely about the North. When it states, "Emancipation would redefine the Civil War, turning it from a struggle to preserve the Union to one focused on ending slavery," it means "Emancipation would redefine the Civil War, turning it, for the North, from a struggle to preserve the Union to one focused on ending slavery." I will edit it to insert the words "for the North" in brackets.
These is a deeper problem with the second sentence, however: It is false. The Civil War never stopped being, for the North, a struggle to preserve the Union. The sentence should say that emancipation turned the Civil War, for the North, from being solely a struggle to preserve the Union to being also a struggle to end slavery. To correct that will require eliminating the quotation and replacing it with an accurate statement. I'll work on that another time. Maurice Magnus (talk) 22:02, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
I corrected the false statement without eliminating the quotation. Instead I inserted "solely" and "also" into the quotation, in brackets, of course. Maurice Magnus (talk) 22:06, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
The sentences I refer to are these, in the third paragraph under "Coverage": "Some 20,000 to 50,000 slaves were freed the day it went into effect in parts of nine of the ten states to which it applied (Texas being the exception). In every Confederate state (except Tennessee and Texas), the Proclamation went into immediate effect in Union-occupied areas." I will number the questions these two sentences raise.
1. "20,000 to 50,000" must refer to slaves who were physically, not merely legally freed, because the introduction says that more than 3.5 million were legally freed. If I am correct, then we should say that they were physically freed. We should also say how it happened that 20,000 to 50,000 were physically freed, and why weren't any freed in Texas? Was it because 20,000 to 50,000 were in Union-occupied areas, so the slaves could flee to Union lines, and were there no Union-occupied areas in Texas?
2. Regarding "(except Tennessee and Texas)," footnote 6 explains that the EP did not apply in Tennessee because Tennessee was under Union control. But why not in Texas? The EP explicitly names Texas as one of the states where it applies, so Texas was not an exception.
3. The statement that "the Proclamation went into immediate effect in Union-occupied areas" does not make sense. I am assuming that "Union-occupied" means occupied by the Union army, whereas "Union-controlled" means that the state was politically controlled by the Union. Therefore, the statement that "the Proclamation went into immediate effect in Union-occupied areas" does not refer to Union-controlled areas, in which the EP did not apply. The EP went into immediate effect in all areas where it applied, Union-occupied or otherwise. If an area was Union-occupied, then slaves were able to enter Union lines and become physically free. But that is a separate matter from the EP's taking immediate effect. Should "the Proclamation went into immediate effect in Union-occupied areas" instead say that slaves became immediately free in Union-occupied areas? But we've already said, "Some 20,000 to 50,000 slaves were freed the day it went into effect in parts of nine of the ten states to which it applied."
This is a mess and is beyond my ability to clarify. Maurice Magnus (talk) 20:41, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
I deleted the two confused sentences.Maurice Magnus (talk) 13:12, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
There were escaped slaves and freeman in the Union States before the Civil War, and they joined the Union Army at the start of the Civil War, so there were many in the Union Army before Emancipation Proclamation was made. 2601:647:4000:12E0:419F:F438:9F20:CB35 (talk) 15:53, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
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