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Article for review: STILLWATER IGNEOUS COMPLEX
Clarity
The clarity of this article is somewhat low. Firstly, there is not a lot of information on the Stillwater Igneous Complex and the information that IS present is to very thoroughly explained.
Structure
As stated in the Clarity section, there is not a lot of information present, so the structure for this article cannot be fully assesed.
Balanced Coverage
This article only discusses the Geology and the Orebodies that are present in the Complex. There isn't really any coverage to begin with.
Neutrality
The article is very neutral in the information that it provides. However the information is low so there really isn't any room for bias.
Talk Page
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Sources
The sources for this article are very poor. Citations do not have links to them and most of the sources provided are very old dating back to 1933. An citation that could be useful for this article is "Jones, W. R., Peoples, J. W., & Howland, A. L. (1960). Igneous and tectonic structures of the Stillwater Complex, Montana. US Government Printing Office." However this article is also fairly old (1960) but other sources may exist that are more recent in date.
Suggestions for improvement
This article has more weaknesses than it does strengths. There is very little information present in this article. The main points are addressed but they are very weak and too few. Some suggestions for this article would be to add more information on the geology of the Complex, information on the structures present in the Complex, as well as some industrial uses for this Complex.
ADDING TO AN ARTICLE
Added to the Geography section to the Stillwater Igneous Complex article: The complex contains Paleozoic sedimentary rocks on its northern side and contains Precambrian rocks of granite, granite gneiss and schist on its southern side. The Precambrian rock on its southern side is mostly provided by the Beartooth Mountains.
Added a reference as well: "Igneous and tectonic structures of the Stillwater complex, Montana". 1960.
START DRAFTING YOUR CONTRIBUTIONS
Started contributing to the Chromite article
This article needs improvement in many aspects. It is very bare when describing the properties of chromite and very briefly explains it's occurrences. The reason that adding a properties section for this article is important is because when people are searching for chromite, it is essential to explain what chromite is and what its properties are. This will significantly improve the article because the mineral will be fully explained and will have details behind what makes this mineral and its physical and chemical properties. Also, information on the deposit location of this mineral will also add significance to the article as a physical distribution is important when discussing where this mineral is most abundant.
Some sources that could help in improving this article and that could help in adding information to the sections listed above are:
https://materials.springer.com/isp/crystallographic/docs/sd_1714529
https://www.pmfias.com/copper-nickel-chromite-distribution/
Bondioli, F. , Ferrari, A. M., Leonelli, C. and Manfredini, T. (2008). Chromite as a Pigment for Fast‐Fired Porcelain Tiles. In 98th Annual Meeting and the Ceramic Manufacturing Council's Workshop and Exposition: Materials & Equipment/Whitewares: Ceramic Engineering and Science Proceedings, R. K. Wood (Ed.). doi:10.1002/9780470294420.ch6 (this reference talks about an application that can be used by using chromite)
In this sandbox, I will add a contribution in the form of an application section. The original article has a Uses section but doesn't contain any applications of chromite that can be used. I will use information from the Uses section of the article as well as the source listed above to get information from: